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I like how Silver Spoon lifts the top of her panel as she butts in!
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Finally a comic with Diamond Tiara as the main pony. I love this! great story so far and amazing art. thank you for the great comic!
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Where is the next page? Or is this not continuing?
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Wow, it's very pretty! ^^ I can't wait for the next part. >u<
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Your words make me happy. Thanks
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From mother to cousin. Sounds a nicer fit. And she playfully teases Tiara? Cute. Elated to finally seeing this beautiful page be given life again. Your soft warm colors really help bring out the jovial feel of this really lighthearted page. Silver Spoon wins some real comedic points with that fourth wall breaking moment as she squeezes between the lovey-dovey best cousins reunion here. Goes to show there is a lot even Silver doesn't yet know about Diamond, then again as kids how often do we even bother to ask such silly questions when all we're usually focused on is making sure we're having fun with our best friend(s)?
Art Style: Diamond in the last panel reminds me of an old pony artists who used to do a Pinkie Pie tumblr before moving onto making a sort of spin of his on with cats that was inspired by Lackadaisy Cats. He too used to use soft colorings sort of how you see DT's eyes in that panel. Yet his were less warm colorings and more cool (not hip, gansta cool. Just, color vibrancy cool like one would have on a TV setting.) Yet, that's pretty much as far as comparisons go in comparison here as your art style is far more flexible and malleable, akin to sort of show-like marshmallow ponies. They look and feel and gesture in ways that come off as pudgy, even down to their hoofsies that bend, stretch, and squish so adorably well. It's like an animation on pause.
The eyes and expressions on these characters are both fun and interesting. The effort put into line work is brought out well by the warm and soft colors, normally colors tend to overpower the linework and feel flat, even bleed over them, but not so with this page. You take the time and put in the effort to make it all shine. A perfect mix of traditional art with digital. These people would probably be in shock if they knew there was barely a difference between your traditional works and digital ones. Though It's so hard to tell sometimes since your traditional coloring is pretty much on par with what you do on digital at times. It's wonderful.
Art Style: 5/5
Originality: 5/5
Presentation: 6/5
Immersion: 5/5
Simply beautiful. Between the first panel's introduction's flowery opening with the reveal of Fluer, followed by the supportive comedic antics of Silver Spoon's shock and fangirlism, with Diamond's casuality despite having such a popular and well known celebrity as a cousin whose all too eager to reunite with her feisty little cousin, it all just flows pretty naturally.
Welcome back. Whether more pages are made to continue this or not, I'm just happy to see you back in the zone, as it were.
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Having Fleur as Diamond's mother would clash with too many headcanons, wouldn't it? Even if it didn't, they would still be cousins, because this is how the story needs to go.
Truth is, I don't think I will be able to rest at peace without having at least finished this page. Too often have I given up before. And how elated am I having you, Telaros, after almost a year, enjoying my work and encouraging me!
I really enjoy your compliments and criticism. A lot.
My work is not as perfect as you make it appear, but I still do try my best meeting higher standards of quality and tell an engaging story. I still do need to work a lot on my pace and speed of production, while still enjoying the creative process. This time, I spend more effort on backgrounds too. Especially the lillies. Especiallly the lillies!
It is good to be back. Summer is promising me more time to draw and create. At heart, I really want to continue this comic series. Then again, as years come, we all get more work and responsibilities, so I do not want to give you false promises about Everfree Filly.
I will try my best.
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I'm glad you decided continue your comic, I'm big fan of your style and this story was just too cute for just stop it ^^ cheers!
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Thanks! I hope to write some more soon enough
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Can't wait for the next part, I wanna know where this is going
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Oh hey! I remember you. :>
Silver, you grasping fangirl...
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Oh my gosh, this comic is continuing after all? That's wonderful! I thought the project was abandoned, so it's great to see this beautiful work being continued.
Diamond and Silver need more fanworks, and this is easily among the best.
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I think Diamond Tiara & Silver Spoon would have more fan art, if they weren't one of the most hated characters of the fandom.
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It is a project I hold dear and having people, who still remember and appreciate this comic is really the best! Thank you.
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I once read a fanfic where Diamond Tiara's cutie mark is for her talent in modeling, just like her mother who was killed in a train accident while she was pregnant with DT's little brother.
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That's a sad story. Did it all end well for Diamond Tiara?
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Not sure, that last time I checked on FiMfiction the last part wasn't finished yet It's about after DT commits suicide, Apple Bloom sneaks into her house and swipes her diary to read it...She learns that they used to be friends when they were younger, but after her mom died, her father started binge drinking and becoming distant, even shipping DT off to summer camp where she met Silver Spoon and was bullied by the other campers. When she got back, Apple Bloom and the CMC start being rude to her for some reason (I forgot) and that's why DT acts like such a little snob. I forgot the name of the fanfic but if you hunt around on FiMfiction I bet you can find it
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Eeyup 
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Yes! I'll have to start working on the next page too..
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Second panel: "I has been", assuming should be "It has been" :3
Silver Spoon, stop fangirling over somepony other than Diamond Tiara! She's gonna get jealous and- Actaully that would be adorable. Keep fangirling over Fleur!
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Thanks for the notice. Hehe, that's an embarassing typo right here... I'll fix it as soon as I get back on my computer
Actually, you are right! She will get jealous.
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That certainly was some suspenseful buildup. Glad to see it wasn't just some OC.
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I enjoy ending my pages with an open invitation to the next one aka cliffhanger.
I not plan on introducing pony OC's, since secondary characters from the original show offer enough room to play around. I did plan however, on introducing two magical creatures.
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Glad to see you're still interested in the idea.
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Time constraints are always a tough hing to manage. Hopefully, I will muster as much dedication as you always do, and deliver the next page within a shoter period.
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If you can keep having fun with it, you'll never have a reason to stop. That's why my series is still going.
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just found this and it is now on my DA comics to read list, Fleur is one of those background ponies that I find very interesting to see expanded on.
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True! Fleur is one of those ponies we rarely see any content made by fans anymore.
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It took me a small while to realize what this was and then my jaw dropped.
It's still going on.
omf (◕ ヮ ◕)
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It was hard to remember, because a long time had passed since I posted he previous page of the comic.
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