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Published: 2014-05-18 16:20:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 889; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description Hop is a biter with no bite. He does not posses the recessive gene that makes biters what they are, despite coming from an old Cynd family. Unlike those with the full pair of recessives, Hop could not turn from birth or even turn as a thirteen year old with the usually triggering bite of a family member. He has a sort of blocker gene that refuses to allow the change.
  This made him an outsider within his old blood kin, a broken toy. He brought shame upon his family, his body refusing his heritage. His family cast him out. Luckily, his elder second cousins were not so fussed about honour or image. The Feigns took Hop in when he was 14, after several attempts from his family to turn him leaving his neck scarred from collarbone to jaw, and looked after him. His lack of Moonchange made him a perfect babysitter for the family's children, at least those who would have to be Bitten later. He still is.
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xXnerd101Xx [2014-05-19 02:07:32 +0000 UTC]

Ohh, mysterious... I hope you are planning to upload more

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anonbea In reply to xXnerd101Xx [2014-05-20 11:46:39 +0000 UTC]

at least a little bit more, I am not so cruel c:

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xXnerd101Xx In reply to anonbea [2014-05-20 23:42:07 +0000 UTC]

Yay!

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smilingStone [2014-05-18 21:09:26 +0000 UTC]

I really really enjoy the atmosphere of this story, I can't wait to see where you're leading us to!

(pst, if you have an opportunity to fix it, I think there's a typo mistake in the last panel with "Earth", happens to me a lot to I hope you're not annoyed that I pointed it out >^< )

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anonbea In reply to smilingStone [2014-05-20 11:46:18 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou, glad you're enjoying it c:
 I sort of meant earth as, not a planet, but as literal earth and mud. The gods have no names here. But thank you for pointing it out, I'm terrible with spelling mistakes too!

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