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baronvonvoe In reply to Cathiegirl16 [2008-05-30 03:46:37 +0000 UTC]
It will definitely be a hard fight to say the least.
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Cathiegirl16 In reply to baronvonvoe [2008-05-31 03:48:40 +0000 UTC]
aww, great i love excitment and battles!
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JK-in-the-Rain [2008-05-29 19:36:17 +0000 UTC]
I love epic battles! Very good work, I do not know enough english to describe it better.
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baronvonvoe In reply to JK-in-the-Rain [2008-05-30 03:47:21 +0000 UTC]
That's okay I'm just glad you are enjoying the story.
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k2e [2008-05-28 19:48:24 +0000 UTC]
awesome!
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baronvonvoe In reply to k2e [2008-05-28 19:52:39 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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ThatNinja [2008-05-28 17:43:30 +0000 UTC]
that was great but sometimes you put a question mark at the end of the sentence instead of at the end of the speaking part in the sentence
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baronvonvoe In reply to ThatNinja [2008-05-28 19:43:51 +0000 UTC]
It's the grammar check...it does weird things like that.
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baronvonvoe In reply to Anime-fanygirl [2008-05-28 19:44:46 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your continued words of encouragement.
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Autistic-teddy [2008-05-28 09:52:23 +0000 UTC]
I bet you are going to have Naruto instruct Sasuke to do to Kyubi what Madara did
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baronvonvoe In reply to Autistic-teddy [2008-05-28 10:33:16 +0000 UTC]
Impressive, most impressive...but you have not earned your cookie yet.
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Brabados [2008-05-28 09:25:06 +0000 UTC]
well lets see i forcast the awsome ness to continue with light shino vs tenzen and an overcast of naruto vs lighting guy
i think that this is pure awsomness even with writers block
keep it up
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Brabados In reply to baronvonvoe [2008-05-28 09:55:41 +0000 UTC]
she shall rain down fury in the hospital district for the next few days with a chance of Lee drunkenly braking skulls mid way through
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baronvonvoe In reply to Brabados [2008-05-28 10:31:59 +0000 UTC]
There's nothing more dangerous than a she-bear who has lost her cubs or is trying to protect them. I just tried to envision what she would be like if one of her children was hurt and well given her temper...it speaks for itself.
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Brabados In reply to baronvonvoe [2008-05-28 10:34:22 +0000 UTC]
i belive you captured it very well. but i still love shino so the epic battle needs some hardcore bug goin in though the mouth and eyesockets and eating internal organs
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baronvonvoe In reply to Brabados [2008-05-28 11:28:06 +0000 UTC]
Wow...you're wanting to go super graphic on that don't you.
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Brabados In reply to baronvonvoe [2008-05-28 11:30:53 +0000 UTC]
in a word...YES. sorry i think that shino has like the most awsome abilaty and you could do so meny things with it that the only way to capture it right is to be as graphic as posible
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baronvonvoe In reply to Brabados [2008-05-29 05:28:26 +0000 UTC]
Well that kind of kill would be cool but you have to remember Shino's beetles and Tenzen's locust are already battling all around them.
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Brabados In reply to baronvonvoe [2008-05-29 06:52:30 +0000 UTC]
That is a very good point but he could be storeing "backup" ones inside his body still for some kind of "awsome" move or finisher
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baronvonvoe In reply to Brabados [2008-05-29 07:46:27 +0000 UTC]
That would be an idea but this is a fight where he can hold nothing back. Tenzen has been around for a lot longer than Shino...and unfortunately even though I have not gone into this in the story Shino is out matched. That's why he's fighting so brutally and so close to his opponent...he can't afford to give an insect user of Tenzen's skill room to use insect jutsu.
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Brabados In reply to baronvonvoe [2008-05-29 08:14:28 +0000 UTC]
awsome then i cant wait to see waht yuo come up with
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baronvonvoe In reply to Brabados [2008-05-29 08:16:37 +0000 UTC]
I'm working on it...it's kind of hard right now because I have so much I want to write and there's so much going on...O_o;; What have I gotten myself into?
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Brabados In reply to baronvonvoe [2008-05-29 08:23:09 +0000 UTC]
a vicious cycle of post awsomeness get asked to do more of it
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baronvonvoe In reply to Brabados [2008-05-29 10:14:19 +0000 UTC]
Indeed my friend...indeed.
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baronvonvoe In reply to Brabados [2008-05-28 19:45:46 +0000 UTC]
That's true but I don't want to have to flag it as mature content.
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