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Brokensmile5559 — I'm Done.
Published: 2011-10-17 15:59:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 308; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 2
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Description I'm done.
I'm done.
Don't think I'll be back.

That hurt.
That stung.
What on earth have you done?

What you said.
What you did.
Can never be undone.

So I'm done.
I'm done.

My heart is frozen.
My thoughts are repeating.
My eyes are not dry.

But I'm done.

I'll never love again.
Who believes in love away.
Life is pain.
Life is lies.

Don't act,
like you were doing this for me.
If you were,
you wouldn't have told me to leave.

But I'm done.
I'm done.


So don't worry about me...
Just worry about cleaning up the bloody mess I leave.
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Comments: 9

mscaspercat1 [2011-10-29 16:28:20 +0000 UTC]

<3 i really eppriciate the way u write, it speaks to me. I dont believe in love, my mtes think its bullshit but i dont, i did once though..... i piss off my mates wen i say that life int worth living for and that its shit and wen they see the scars on my wrists. so wat. u need someone to understand especially wen somthing like this is happening, i understand so much xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx i love the way u write x

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RedHeadedBitch [2011-10-29 09:27:53 +0000 UTC]

<3

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ZCDSummer [2011-10-28 19:11:05 +0000 UTC]

This is.. beautifully sad... ;-;
Written from the heart, I can tell, as with your other recent stuff - I know the feeling, and all you can do is please don't hurt yourself (that'll make me cry ;^ but be happy. Yah, so, fuck him, amiright? ;D You can be so much happier anyway, you need to show how amazingly strong you are by just smiling.
Yes, let it out, but always remember there's a time and place... it sound kinda harsh, but... only leave your true emotions with those you can trust them with, because I used to just rant on about mine all the time, and I now have no friends xD
So be strong, and laugh, because people, annoyingly, love happier people more, just because they're happy.

...Wow, that was long winded xD Sorry if I seem like I'm butting in where I don't belong, it's just that I relate to so many of your poems ^^'' (Which, by the way, are wonderful.)
...So yah. I'll, uh, shut up now.

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Brokensmile5559 In reply to ZCDSummer [2011-10-28 19:53:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. It's okay I love when I get messages like this. I know right... Fuck him.

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ZCDSummer In reply to Brokensmile5559 [2011-10-28 20:33:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh, really? Oh good, I'm glad I didn't say anything stupid ^^''
Yah ;D Mm hope you feel better soon, dear ^^

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KissTheSunrise [2011-10-19 04:33:44 +0000 UTC]

ok ok i get it... let it all out here... but don't go cuttin or hurtin yerself. nobody is worth that.
let it blow on out............. everything!!

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RavenWingQuill [2011-10-18 17:01:06 +0000 UTC]

You ok?

Well written too

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Brokensmile5559 In reply to RavenWingQuill [2011-10-18 18:10:29 +0000 UTC]

Yeah... I'll be okay. Thanks for asking. And thanks

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RavenWingQuill In reply to Brokensmile5559 [2011-10-19 04:47:57 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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