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Pineapplelicious [2012-06-18 17:44:11 +0000 UTC]
your coloring and anatomy really improved : D
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Allanon13 [2012-06-08 14:27:23 +0000 UTC]
the colors and the light/shadow effects are really great and the body is very beautiful, a really good artwork!
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crazyshiro [2012-05-28 23:58:37 +0000 UTC]
Okay, you ask for critique, so I'll try to be fair.
Your color palette is wonderful. Pairing an analogous color scheme with splashes of their respective complimentary colors gives the piece a sense of continuity without being overpowering. You dialed down some of your greens using purple, which both incorporates and accentuates your more saturated hues.
You treat the background as blocks of color, which is good! Instead of saying, "I am painting a tree," it looks like you are putting the colors where you feel that they should go. This way, the background is not overpowering.
Her hip-to-shoulder ratio is good. This, when combined with her muscular definition, makes her more believable. Between the two, she feels balanced.
Now, I do have some issues with some of her anatomy. (Granted, I'm still working on some of these things too.)
Her feet are a little small for her body. This, along with awkward positioning and shape, make her look like she's about to fall over, even though her torso doesn't realize it. A good way to fix this would have been to plant one foot firmly on the ground. While it's not as "sexy", it does wonders for incorporating the character into her surroundings, and helps maintain her balance.
Her boobs are next. With no support, a woman's breasts don't hang that way. I know that she's not necessarily supposed to be realistic, but everything else is so well-defined that it seems out of place. That, and it serves as part of the weight that's throwing her off balance. Perhaps she could use a reduction. Also, the tits themselves are normally a little lower and to the sides. It almost would have been better to have them showing than to put the hair in the wrong position.
As for composition, it might have served you well to move her a little to the left. While centered compositions are simpler, they are also less visually stimulating. Using the rule of thirds, or the golden mean, will fix some of this.
You used purple shadows in the background, which is good. However, it becomes inconsistent on the figure when you used black. Generally, colored shadows work more naturally than black.
Finally, the rabbit is kind of pointless. It doesn't serve a purpose. It doesn't serve to help lead the viewer around the piece, and it wasn't treated with the same care as the dryad, or with the same softness as the background. My eye gets stuck there.
Overall, it's a lovely piece. It just has some balance issues that should be fixed. I hope that I get to see more of your work!
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A3Kitsune [2012-05-10 10:09:23 +0000 UTC]
Nice.
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dianadu [2012-03-29 17:44:05 +0000 UTC]
what program did you use ?
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Felox08 In reply to dianadu [2012-03-29 22:19:01 +0000 UTC]
Photoshop Cs 5
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dianadu In reply to Felox08 [2012-03-30 07:34:24 +0000 UTC]
amazing efekt !
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wolfmantto [2012-03-21 20:25:00 +0000 UTC]
Finally get a second to comment on this artwork. I love it. I also agree that it resembles witherfang from dragonage origins. Really good work I applaud you.
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DeadCobra [2012-03-16 23:05:00 +0000 UTC]
Sexy
Very nice
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ericsmth78 [2012-03-10 03:40:49 +0000 UTC]
nice*
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ericsmth78 [2012-03-10 03:40:43 +0000 UTC]
wow very niee
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Jamielei [2012-03-09 18:43:47 +0000 UTC]
nice
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DragoRoku [2012-03-09 14:39:17 +0000 UTC]
Its beautiful. You are an excellent artist. The texture looks believable, I love the concept, and you give such a positive persona in the way she stands and interacts with her environment.
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Dahoser [2012-03-09 13:26:14 +0000 UTC]
That looks amazing! Very well done.
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Dramira-Official [2012-03-09 03:28:24 +0000 UTC]
Ooooooo gorgeous!! Wonderful work.
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Sliverbolt [2012-03-09 01:53:12 +0000 UTC]
new style works very well
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ArcticFox501 [2012-03-08 23:11:11 +0000 UTC]
sooo awesome
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UseTheBrakes [2012-03-08 21:47:31 +0000 UTC]
Actually, this reminds me of the Lady of the Forest in Dragon Age Origins. Except she had werewolves. And not pansy Twilight werewolves either. REAL werewolves! Except what's a Dryad?
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Felox08 In reply to UseTheBrakes [2012-03-08 22:32:35 +0000 UTC]
Dryads are tree nymphs in Greek mythology
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UseTheBrakes In reply to Felox08 [2012-03-09 01:31:39 +0000 UTC]
Oh...I see. All I learned about Greek mythology was from the God of War games...
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Krawczyk In reply to UseTheBrakes [2012-03-09 18:04:18 +0000 UTC]
You should learn a bit from The Witcher too 8D
(most 'forest spirits' from the same area have vast similarities, such as strigoi and vampire.)
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UseTheBrakes In reply to Krawczyk [2012-03-09 20:25:37 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I want to play The Witcher 2, but I don't think my PC can run it...but the 360 version IS coming out, so I will give that consideration...
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Heli-Starr2 [2012-03-08 21:34:16 +0000 UTC]
Very sexy.
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Navane [2012-03-08 21:30:13 +0000 UTC]
Dude, sexy sexy SEXY! I really really wish you would've uploaded this in a slightly higher resolution because there is a lot of detail you can't see. This is an awesome style, and I can't wait to see more works from you like this. In my opinion, this is among your most artistic work to date.
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Felox08 In reply to Navane [2012-03-08 22:31:00 +0000 UTC]
Try now.
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Navane In reply to Felox08 [2012-03-09 20:03:54 +0000 UTC]
That's definitely better, but you can still see the compression artifacts around objects (particularly the character). If you could tone down the compression a little, I'm sure it'd help a lot in the image clarity.
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Levia-the-Dragon [2012-03-08 20:51:05 +0000 UTC]
Mm, very classical Dryad, both in terms of design and abilities.
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artest-pad [2012-03-08 20:47:23 +0000 UTC]
nice job
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Felox08 In reply to Daveyboysmith [2012-03-08 22:33:30 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much. There were lots of experimentation while doing this ilustration
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Krawczyk In reply to Felox08 [2012-03-09 18:46:30 +0000 UTC]
You should definitely experiment more often in that case!
The only real weakness I see is that the fairy being a little glowy dot, it should still be possible to see a little bit of 'structure' to the being within, unless you're trying to imply it's pure energy. (I think it was meant to be a fairy anyway, since you have so much zelda art.) I just don't think 'ball of light fairy' translated well to static 2D.
On a random note the rock looks a bit like a space-agey backpack.
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SerenaElric [2012-03-08 20:22:32 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful and sexy! XD
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SilverDragon234 [2012-03-08 20:00:27 +0000 UTC]
Inconcievably magnificent!
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Lomeloke [2012-03-08 19:59:11 +0000 UTC]
beautiful
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teturo [2012-03-08 18:35:48 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful scene ^_^
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Felox08 In reply to teturo [2012-03-08 18:42:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, im trying new stuff.
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teturo In reply to Felox08 [2012-03-08 18:49:47 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure ^_^
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