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Published: 2006-07-06 19:47:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 61931; Favourites: 2211; Downloads: 740
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Description I think, At some point,
Everyone dreams of finding..
An Edward.
Someone whose name you call, or whisper.
And he's right there waiting.
Someone who hums a lullaby,
And holds you close, as you drift off.
Someone who seems to just glitter, in the Sunlight,
Whose eyes are often Topaz,
Warm,
And Reassuring.
Someone who takes you to dinner,
And ignores the pretty waitress.
Someone who follows you,
Watches you always,
Secretly, Just to be sure..
You're always okay.
Someone Romantic,
Yet has a good sense of humor.
Someone Ancient, Yet Young.
Who'll save your life, No matter what.
Who cries when you're injured.
Someone who cleans out even the deadliest wounds,
However impossibly hard it may be.
Someone to take you to your prom,
Dispite your complaints,
Who teaches you to waltz,
As you stand on his feet.
Someone who just knows when it's time.
When forever really means forever.
And takes you away,
For years to come.
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Comments: 985

greengirl17 [2009-02-27 01:41:08 +0000 UTC]

i love that! its awesome!!

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Gauged-Butterfly [2009-02-26 17:31:50 +0000 UTC]

I may have find my 'Edward'.

Although he isn't at all like Twilight series Edward.

I do like this though.

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3dna [2009-02-23 22:46:04 +0000 UTC]

I just... love it

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GirGurl [2009-02-22 03:49:42 +0000 UTC]

*sigh* I wish i could get a guy like Edward. Perfect in almost every way. I could swear i met a vampire once. I never got to see if his skin was like marble, and he was always at skool on a sunny day, but not on rainy days. (i thinks he sparkles in the rain^_^) He was very old fashoned, was very beautiful and pale, and he hung out with the outcasts. (me and my buds) LOL i miss him so much. I was hugged twice by a vampire!

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pretty-mimi [2009-02-20 04:00:34 +0000 UTC]

Very Beautiful

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No-Named [2009-02-19 07:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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GirGurl In reply to No-Named [2009-02-22 03:37:24 +0000 UTC]

so we can still dream cant we? Oh and if u dont like it... DON'T READ IT!

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Estrellada [2009-02-15 01:19:35 +0000 UTC]

I like it, because I just don't understand how are outhere females that hate Edward so much.

Personally...I'd kill to have somebody like that next to me, your perfect puzzle piece.

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weetp22 [2009-02-13 02:03:03 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Erislei In reply to weetp22 [2009-02-26 15:06:13 +0000 UTC]

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weetp22 In reply to Erislei [2009-02-28 13:57:37 +0000 UTC]

It's a shame that you have to scroll through roughly 40 pages of gushing to get to some real comments.

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Erislei In reply to weetp22 [2009-02-28 19:36:13 +0000 UTC]

Amen.

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dejectedxangel [2009-02-12 06:02:36 +0000 UTC]

This really made me smile like this ^_^

Good job <3

I want an Edward ;-;

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samantha994 [2009-02-09 12:36:43 +0000 UTC]

ooooooooooowh, it's true

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kindfullove12 [2009-02-09 06:43:24 +0000 UTC]

I'm not an addict to twilight nor a fan but gosh, this is so perfect in my opinion ;D
and keep it that way aha

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blueabyss17404 [2009-02-09 04:03:02 +0000 UTC]

omg, i love it, is so cute, and true xD.

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Soul-Reader [2009-02-08 17:18:43 +0000 UTC]

Aww that's so beautiful

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tempretsangel [2009-02-07 17:56:24 +0000 UTC]

well written but edward isnt really that great...

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grassyswing [2009-02-07 02:11:21 +0000 UTC]

i love it. how come Edward can't be real... i mean he's the perfect bf

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GirGurl In reply to grassyswing [2009-02-22 03:43:09 +0000 UTC]

tottaly. He's PERFECT!!!

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drama-queen51 [2009-02-06 03:25:06 +0000 UTC]

WOW!! That is WONDERFULL! I LOVE it!! *Sigh!*

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DearWorldTryChange [2009-02-04 05:14:29 +0000 UTC]

this is really cute. "D

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lucifism [2009-02-01 13:20:29 +0000 UTC]

Nice poem

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buggy6565 [2009-02-01 05:44:31 +0000 UTC]

So true. Im sure its what every girl (secretly) wants in a man. To bad nobody's that perfect i guess.

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Elle-Roar [2009-01-31 07:49:31 +0000 UTC]

Great poem. So true.

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LadyBerkana [2009-01-28 15:05:55 +0000 UTC]

I favoured this piece a couple of months ago, loving it intensely. I just read the book Twilight for the first time, so now I know where the inspiration came from. Now that I know where it's from, I like it even more, but I thought it was beautiful months ago, which is proved by my remembrance: everybody dreams of finding an Edward. It's a great poem. It deserves more than just be here on this site. You have a talent. Though I get it that you're inspired by Twilight. I know I am. Good luck with the further pieces.

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Hatzeh In reply to LadyBerkana [2009-01-30 13:13:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^^

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Boo0ger [2009-01-28 12:06:08 +0000 UTC]

D; true. But not realistic, I think.

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sqrlaubrey [2009-01-25 20:59:04 +0000 UTC]

this is a very nice poem :]
i wish i could write like you

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dimi546 [2009-01-25 20:13:13 +0000 UTC]

Ohmigosh. This is friggin' beautiful.

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blankpage45 [2009-01-22 19:00:40 +0000 UTC]

I love it and would never stell it it's to good!

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forever-apple-pie [2009-01-22 02:08:46 +0000 UTC]

its beautiful

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Llammythallama [2009-01-21 09:14:08 +0000 UTC]

So so so very true! I love it!

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Patchouli-Rolling [2009-01-21 07:40:12 +0000 UTC]

I Desperatly need an Edward,

All the guys I know are retards or taken.

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TeaganMarie [2009-01-20 04:41:28 +0000 UTC]

I have one...I'm marrying him on Friday *sigh*

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FlashFour [2009-01-19 21:44:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm not addicted to the books, but I did like them.

I love your poem. Except for a couple lines though, it made me think of my dad.

However, your poem describes what every girl wishes for: a Prince Charming.

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Mikstik [2009-01-14 01:19:57 +0000 UTC]

this amazing

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thedogluver [2009-01-13 19:03:26 +0000 UTC]

Very lovely poem I really enjoyed it.

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Wraith-Two [2009-01-13 01:58:25 +0000 UTC]

That is beautiful!

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Loesie [2009-01-12 18:05:26 +0000 UTC]

Well, I totally dream of finding him!
It's a beautiful poem

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izzyleigh [2009-01-11 18:56:09 +0000 UTC]

phenomenal :]
Sorry it's getting stolen

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puppyqueen14 [2009-01-11 18:29:12 +0000 UTC]

Wish there was a store where i could pick up a bf like that...

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Call-Me-Lucifer [2009-01-09 23:04:43 +0000 UTC]

LOL My boyfriend is exactly what you wrote here

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kovujackson [2009-01-09 00:22:15 +0000 UTC]

dude this is perfect. and im sorry to hear that your poem is getting stolen.

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SkyQuill [2009-01-08 22:00:26 +0000 UTC]

This is really beautifully written and although i'm not a "Twi-hard" *shudders* this is simply lovely and so dead on. You should threaten a law suit against anyone who copies it

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StockholmFairy [2009-01-08 20:41:32 +0000 UTC]

this is really beautiful <3

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uLeeFlo [2009-01-08 12:47:28 +0000 UTC]

great job

edward <33

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AllIFearMeansNothing [2009-01-06 00:46:06 +0000 UTC]

so beautiful! anyone who copies this will have to go through me!

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AmazingKinuko [2009-01-06 00:42:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh. My. God.
I'm gonna hate you and your poem.
Why ?
Because i thought i've forgotten to cry for an Edward. And you reminded me all the reasons why i wanted one next to me.
Life is so hard. Love is harder !

Pfff... I want an Edward T_T. Right now. Thanks to you.

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EmpressHockee [2009-01-04 21:45:58 +0000 UTC]

I love this. And it is absolutely true in my opinion. It's fantastic

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