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Silkenvixen [2018-08-19 16:59:56 +0000 UTC]
Oh I DO like this!Β I understand the backstory, she just looks so casual and everyday to me, I just like it!
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TeiOuja [2016-06-18 15:33:49 +0000 UTC]
Aww, she looks adorable. Like a big puppy.
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DSF-Customs [2012-12-16 22:24:29 +0000 UTC]
Cant wait to se her in color..
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DSF-Customs [2012-11-01 18:17:16 +0000 UTC]
she is probebly one of my fav saw those other pictures of her she is hot and very cute ^_^ would love to meet her
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Mars-Walker [2011-08-05 03:57:56 +0000 UTC]
Well, its not so much trite as its been heavily mined over the past few decades. Its the anxiety of knowing that your at the top of the heap, and theres nowhere to go but down.
Regardless, I think its worth exploring though if you try and develop the story from a different... well, geographic standpoint. Post apocalyptic stories tend to be in desert or urban waste kind of environments. Writers tend to forget though, that the world is a diverse place, and people would react differently based on the climate and geography, some doing better than others (I know over half of Los Angeles would starve if it got cut off from the Central Valley. Folks living in farm areas would do fine as long as they have water).
Thats my two cents on the story. As for Jodi, shes certainly a nice looking lady, but I do worry that she looks a bit too much like the stereotypical post apocalyptic damsel. A baseball cap and a worn jacket might be worth experimenting with.
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Mars-Walker In reply to KalahariFox [2011-08-10 02:49:42 +0000 UTC]
Glad it helped! Cant wait to see more of your work!
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ThunderWolf31815 [2011-07-20 19:10:28 +0000 UTC]
O.O tht is really good, and hot
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CodyMacArthurFett [2011-07-13 22:29:31 +0000 UTC]
Just a single nation? That could work. The classical "the world ends in a mushroom cloud now lets dress like bikers" theme has been done to death, but if it's just something like a nation or continent loosing its infrastructure (perhaps thanks to over-reliance on a few limited power sources that are destroyed in natural disaster) then it could be very interesting. Especially if you go for a sort of schizo tech base where everyone's uses horses alongside sniper rifles, and whatnot.
There are plenty of ways for modern society to collapse (chief among them being a loss of electricity), they don't all have to be nuclear. As long as you remember that you should be fine.
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WLrussia [2011-06-23 16:31:20 +0000 UTC]
This theme is awesome. If you could use it properly, not just another "TERRIBALWORLDNUKESBANDITSSTALKERSIMASUPPAHERO", lol.
And love this pic.
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dwuff [2011-06-17 12:45:56 +0000 UTC]
cute! Yes dA's preview/small view does destroy clean lines. It drives me mad!
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DingoPatagonico [2011-06-16 19:08:07 +0000 UTC]
i love the design!!!! =3
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KamatzArkeaa [2011-06-15 23:23:17 +0000 UTC]
I like post apocalyptic themes. But if you think it's too stereotypical, maybe you could make it more of a "post modern society" that just declined naturally rather than due to some apocalyptic event? Like a second dark age only in modern times.
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CasualtyOfWar [2011-06-15 23:08:54 +0000 UTC]
I think that theme would do just fine, if done correctly of course. I wouldn't go the Red Dawn way, if you know what I mean. I'd would definitely like to see your story sometime.
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Tawnya [2011-06-15 22:00:50 +0000 UTC]
Cute!
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