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Published: 2003-03-24 20:40:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 5180; Favourites: 113; Downloads: 322
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Description She said, \"I wanna die tonight. This night is perfect for it. The stars cry for me already. They don\'t know that I\'m still here. So there is no point in staying. The sky is screaming for it. I wanna die tonight. The time is right for it.\"

He said, \"You don\'t wanna die tonight. Look out at the moon. She shines a different light. She knows your true power. She shines for you still. You live for it. You don\'t wanna die tonight. The night is when you truly live.\"

She said, \"I am death tonight. The night is when the pain comes out. The night is when it\'s dark. I come alive, but realize who I really am. I am that darkness out there. Not the moon, or the stars. I am the deep, dark black. I am death tonight. This is how it must be.\"

He said, \"Take me with you. The world is begging for it. Take me away into that deep dark nothing. Where it doesn\'t hurt or burn or sting. Take my tortured soul into the night and fly away in the sky. Take me with you. Take me out of this life.\"

She said, \"Dear boy it is not your time to die tonight. The night\'s not perfect for it. The stars shine brightly for you. They hold dreams in store for you. So there is no point in leaving. The sky is screaming for it. It\'s not your time to die tonight. The time\'s not right for it.\"

I wanna die tonight...This night is perfect for it...
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Comments: 6

OMGillian [2004-11-21 04:26:20 +0000 UTC]

i really like that..when i read its like im there..good job

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projectvxn [2004-07-31 15:12:31 +0000 UTC]

Of all the work you do I think your writing has the most depth. It's a window into a soul I'll probably never meet, although know there's one such as this makes me feel better about being on this planet.

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sinajahn [2003-04-01 03:27:09 +0000 UTC]

Isn't it interesting how we can acheive our best at our absolute lows?
There's nothing quite like contemplating to extinguish oneself to inspire beautiful words...
you have beautiful words.
and have I mentioned how my breath just happens to leave me whenever I see 'Turn Away and Watch You Go'?
You amaze me in your being both physically AND spiritually beautiful...
take care

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stigmatizedgoth [2003-03-24 22:30:02 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that rocks! You are such a great writer, I'm so jealous! great job.

You no die! Me love you!

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clearbreach [2003-03-24 21:38:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this gives me shivers. Very powerful stuff. Good job.

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taz-007 [2003-03-24 20:51:52 +0000 UTC]

I really like this, it's really good. I'm not too sure why I do, it just touches me or something.

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