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kuroineko — The Day

Published: 2004-05-11 00:37:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 843; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 104
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Description [i'd bite my lips
and let them bleed
for a chance to
taste the irony]
[and let it soak
beneath my skin
the pain tht i
have stored within]
[and every day
a little more
will vanish from
my open sores]
[and i will resort
when they're gone
to chewing on
my sweating tongue]
[while chunk by chunk
slide down my throat
i'll realize who
i've pleased the most]
[with lips decayed
and half my tongue
i'll remember what you
repeated all along]
[that every piece of
you would rejoice
the day that i
destroyed my voice]

Credit:
+~virgin-stock
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Comments: 15

inka-inka [2007-09-15 11:58:12 +0000 UTC]

who wrote the words?

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deuxia-devonair [2004-07-31 14:52:09 +0000 UTC]

Excellent poem! Gosh, I love this!

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kuroineko In reply to deuxia-devonair [2004-07-31 17:10:24 +0000 UTC]

Hehe I'm glad you like it. ^_^

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lily-kat [2004-05-14 01:27:21 +0000 UTC]

Did you write that? o.o
It's so angsty!!
I luv it. ;.;

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kuroineko In reply to lily-kat [2004-05-14 15:43:46 +0000 UTC]

lol I did. Fear my teen angst! Mrowr!

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snowslazzin [2004-05-13 14:00:14 +0000 UTC]

wow very emotional, i love it sings in my heart

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kuroineko In reply to snowslazzin [2004-05-13 18:56:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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leeann [2004-05-13 00:44:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Very awesome work. Lots of emotion and feeling here, as always. Keep up the great work.

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MikiAlbatou [2004-05-12 16:26:10 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. Awesome picture too, but the poem is better. You write so good..I envy you!

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kuroineko In reply to MikiAlbatou [2004-05-12 17:59:26 +0000 UTC]

Aww Thanks muchly. ^_^

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MikiAlbatou In reply to kuroineko [2004-05-12 22:21:44 +0000 UTC]

Always not a problem!

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rinkina [2004-05-11 01:03:59 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant. I'm having a bad day and need to also vent. I can see you have a good soul.

<3

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kuroineko In reply to rinkina [2004-05-12 18:01:07 +0000 UTC]

That's very sweet of you to say and I hope you're feeling better. ^_^

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evilshara [2004-05-11 00:40:38 +0000 UTC]

cool O.o

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hardcorerelief [2004-05-11 00:40:12 +0000 UTC]

this is totally kick ass. the picture is horrendousely awesome! and the poem was one of the best dark poems ive read in quiet a bit. nicely done/

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