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Published: 2017-02-24 14:01:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 326; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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I can make a fully shaded headshot like this for 150 points. 



I wanted to test a new way to shade, I really like how it turns out ;w;

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Now I'm going to make a common references for my humans and Warriors characters. After that I'll draw more scenes with my characters ;w; I also plan to make some FNAF and Warriors fanart. 


(c) Art by me.
(c) Jupiter belongs to me. 

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Comments: 4

Peace-In-Violence [2017-02-24 15:46:53 +0000 UTC]

Since you asked for a critique, here goes nothing.
I've only got two things to mention, neither of which are terrible large or important. To begin with, we have those red dots ( I believe they're blushes). In my opinion they're too low on the face. Blushes generally rest directly on the cheekbones which, in turn, sit directly underneath the eyes (they make up the bottom half of the eye sockets). Also they kinda resemble a clown's big red nose and their bright, vibrant clashes a little with the duller, more natural hues of the fur. Consider adding a touch more brown to the blushes and having them follow the contours of the face a little more. ( This is just my opinion and it might go against your natural style, if so just ignore me).
My last qualm is that you've separated the ears and hair from the rest of the face by a line. On the whole this is unnecessary. Lines, as a rule should be avoided whenever possible ( line art excepted).
I hope this helps.
May sunshine and happy days follow wherever you go.

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LysitheaWO In reply to Peace-In-Violence [2017-02-24 15:54:54 +0000 UTC]

The red on her cheecks are not bluches, just markings ( more like tatoos )
I wanted to try something new by making a line around the head but since you're not the first person who point it out I'll try to change that the next time, or at least blend it a bit.

Thanks

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Peace-In-Violence In reply to LysitheaWO [2017-02-24 16:10:04 +0000 UTC]

Common practice probably shot me in the foot there, lots of people use red dots to show blushes.

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LysitheaWO In reply to Peace-In-Violence [2017-02-24 16:30:49 +0000 UTC]

No problem, I should have specify it

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