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Published: 2010-07-14 16:02:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 1506; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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Description a gift for my haiku sensei ~siragiku , whose name means 'white chrysanthemum'.

trust me, i've been wanting to do this for a long while, but it's my lack of skill that prevent me from getting it done.
frankly, i wished my teacher's name was 'sakura' or 'bamboo' or something easier to draw.
the petals and leaves of chrysanthemum is quite a killer to paint. i have to practice till the consistency/flow of the brush is just right to make it not bleed too much into the rice paper and yet flow freely enough to have that carefree style so essential to chinese ink painting.

frame is paper texture so generously provided by `hibbary .

the poem quoted is from the famed "hyaku nin isshu" ('a poem each from a hundred poets') compiled by fujiwara no teika. poem #29:

心あてに折らばや折らむ初霜の
置きもどはせる白菊の花
kokoro ateni worabaya woramu hatusimo no
okimado haseru siragiku no hana

by oosiko uchinomitune
from 'kokinshu' ('a collection from the past and present')

a rough translation of the tanka here:
i thought i would pluck that blossom,
but really it is the first frost
that i mistook for a white chrysanthemum.

there is a chinese equivalent of this tanka:
欲折白菊以为记,却道秋霜惑眼目

白菊先生、いつも俳句の修業にお世話になりました。
どうもありがとうございました!
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Comments: 12

hangdog [2010-07-23 11:17:15 +0000 UTC]

very nice. I'd love to see it without the watermark!

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Bogbrush [2010-07-21 21:43:48 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully done

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p-0-s-s-u-m [2010-07-21 19:57:40 +0000 UTC]

oooh, this is stunningly beautiful... i wish i could create like that, or learn the language... *dreams*

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siragiku [2010-07-20 05:35:09 +0000 UTC]

こちらこそ、大感動です。

句帳を公開した日も実は誕生日だったんですよ。
記念にちょっとアップロードしたら、
とても楽しい句会イベントになって、
多くの人の文字の句を見れました。

今年もとても幸せです。

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moyanII In reply to siragiku [2010-07-20 07:27:55 +0000 UTC]

どの句帳を発表しましたか。

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siragiku In reply to moyanII [2010-07-30 22:57:15 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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moyanII In reply to siragiku [2010-07-31 08:59:11 +0000 UTC]

ああ、昨年の手書き俳句の句会ですね。来年も期待できることがあるでしょう。

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ThatKidBen [2010-07-19 12:30:10 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing, I love ink paintings

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Pete-Random [2010-07-15 17:39:35 +0000 UTC]

That's really beatuiful..

I wish somebody made that for me.

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goldenhan [2010-07-15 14:28:05 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful!!!!!

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somnomollior [2010-07-15 11:30:19 +0000 UTC]

The flower is beautiful and delicate, and I love the touch of yellow on it.

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Reminia [2010-07-15 08:22:06 +0000 UTC]

beautiful work!

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