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Reilune β€” Lips Shut
Published: 2013-06-17 23:37:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 666; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 22
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Description Sew my lips shut and fill my soul with pain
Let it breed darkness inside my brain

Becoming infested in this sickness of silence
Finally broke down and screamed out in violence

Take it all back and pretend it never happened
Mask the wounds as the day lay dampened
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Comments: 16

LithiumJones [2013-08-17 20:14:05 +0000 UTC]

This piece sleaks to me. That silent pain carried inside until it's too much to hold. Beautiful work.

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Reilune In reply to LithiumJones [2013-08-18 14:56:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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WhiteHeartFlame [2013-07-19 18:04:10 +0000 UTC]

Dark, but lovely. Β Nicely done. Β 

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Reilune In reply to WhiteHeartFlame [2013-07-19 18:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. <3

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WhiteHeartFlame In reply to Reilune [2013-07-19 18:08:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. Β Β 

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amandaowl [2013-06-24 14:22:02 +0000 UTC]

NICE!

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Reilune In reply to amandaowl [2013-06-24 22:26:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Zumbotron [2013-06-18 12:16:22 +0000 UTC]

You have a way with words Miss Lorraine

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Reilune In reply to Zumbotron [2013-06-18 17:13:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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909sickle [2013-06-18 10:32:06 +0000 UTC]

I really like your poetry and I don't even like poetry - you have a way of getting to the point without being too obvious. Most poems are either indecipherable or in your face. Somehow, you find a good balance between colorful and meaningful

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Reilune In reply to 909sickle [2013-06-18 17:15:04 +0000 UTC]

It's just the way it comes out.

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craneHARDCORE [2013-06-18 07:19:42 +0000 UTC]

You said a lot in just a few lines. Wonderful work, love.

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Reilune In reply to craneHARDCORE [2013-06-18 17:15:22 +0000 UTC]

<3 Thank you so much, beautiful young lady

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craneHARDCORE In reply to Reilune [2013-06-19 02:55:01 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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williamfdevault [2013-06-18 00:32:58 +0000 UTC]

Good edge. Strong word choice. Solid.

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Reilune In reply to williamfdevault [2013-06-18 01:08:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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