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Published: 2004-10-03 23:52:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 898; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 33
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Sentado aquíal lado del mar,
No puedo quitarte de mi mente.
Pienso en todo...
tus palabras,
el cuerpo,
tu pasión, y
Nosotros.
Sólo quiero mirarte cara a cara
Para ver tu amor
y besarte para siempre...
Con la puesta del sol,
Sueño que estás aquí conmigo,
aguantándome en los brazos,
Mientras vemos las olas yendo y viniendo …
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Por la primera vez me siento completamente feliz
Y llena de emoción,
sólo... para ti.
Por fin estamos juntos...
por fin puedo abrazarte...
y por fin te puedo decir... que
Yo te amo.
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Pero abro mis ojos y veo lo peor:
que no estás…
Que nunca estabas,
y que nunca estarás.
Que sólo existes en mis sueños...
**Translation:**
Sitting here
next to the ocean,
I can't get you out of my mind.
I think of everything...
your words,
your body,
your passion, and
Us.
I just want to see you face to face
To see your love
and kiss you forever...
As the sun sets,
I dream that you are here with me
holding me in your arms,
As we watch the waves come and go...
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For the first time I feel completely happy
And full of emotion
only... for you.
Finally we are together,
finally I can hug you,
and finally I can tell you... that
I love you.
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But I open my eyes and see the worst:
That you are not there...
That you never were there,
And that you never will be there.
That you exist only in my dreams...
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Comments: 39
RAQUEL, this is amazing!!!
i definitely had happy and sad moments throughout the whole thing. and i love how you set up the lines. it makes for an interesting reading experience and definitely adds something more to the entire piece.
i loved it in english and spanish, though the spanish definitely has another side that makes it all more moving.
asombra...
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awww, thanks mike! 
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"Por la primera vez me siento completamente feliz " Bueno, yo creo que suena mejor "por primera vez me siento completamente feliz", ¿no?
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ahhhh, si, gracias. creo que lo voy a dejar asi, pero gracias por tu comentario! lo aprecio mucho, y gracias por pasar a mi pagina!
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awww thanks karen!!! *mwah*
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me encanto el poema, no sabes cuantas veces he estado en esa situacion!!! jejeje bueno nad muy buen escrito!!! saludos desde puerto rico
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si... ya se, lo siento ese sentimiento... deseo que nadie tenia que sentir asi, pero eso es la vida....
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d nada, suerte!!!! ohh and dont worry i speak english, too.
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Muy bonito y bien escrito. Te mando las correcciones en una nota (que son poquitas ^^). Tu español ha mejorado mucho, ciertamente.
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thanks hun! i'll fix those asap!
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awww
its such a beautiful poem! i really love the style and the way you presented it! it flows!!
i know the feeling..
..you don't happen to be talking about me, do you?? 
i'm just joking senorita! 
oh great, here comes another reply to the message box 
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aww thanks so much syl!!! that's so sad, you are one of the people i would hope never felt this way. and yea.... 
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wow. Beautiful!!! 
where did the inspiration come from...lol...
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thanks hun... and
hmmmm.....
i wonder where the inspiration came from....
let's think together on that one.. haha
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haha...oh , hey! cool avatar! just noticed. ^_^
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it's in english too deeds! *rolls eyes* lol
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oh whoops didnt see that
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I dont' want just the dream....
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nice pic
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i dont' want just the dream either, *tear* thanks for you comment janet!!
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Tan bonita! Sounds gorgeous both in Spanish and in English. I like the photo to go along with it, too.
Definitely a +fav. ^^
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Awww, thanks so much!!!!! That really means a lot to me!
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I really love it, it has a very touching ending and it's powerful!
I'm glad Willow is not just my dream, but much more.
Thank you for the wonderful poem!
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Awwwww, you're Willow's boyfriend?? 
Thanks so much for the wonderful comments and +fav!!! You and her look so beautiful in that photo and I had to use it here because it was so touching. It really does mean a lot that the people who read this like it. Thank you.
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i love this!!!!! the ending makes me sad though... but it is very well writen... love the spanish...im like hey i can read this...neat i did learn something in school hehehe.
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thank you soooo much!! yea, this is the first poem that i wrote that i feel so strongly about. i really poured my heart into this one and i feel strongly about it. it means a lot to me that you like it especially since it's your pic on the preview... haha, and i wrote it in spanish so it's better that way, it flows nicely whereas in the english it's very cut and dry. thank you so much for the +fav too!!!
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....................................spee chless.................................. ....
im so glad you put the translation!!!!!!!!! i was like......ahhhhh i cannot read it!!!!!!!!! now i am so glad i was able to. it was amazing!!!!!!! i loved the ending.
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awww thanks so much hun! i was only going to put up the spanish because i think in english it sounds a little choppy and not really flow, because i wrote it in spanish originally. but thank you so much! 
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no problem!!!!!!!!!!! it was WELL worth it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I know the feeling.....can't tell you how many times that has happened to me.
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I'm sure this hasn't happened to you as much as it has to me... *sigh*
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