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LateCustomer [2013-10-14 08:06:05 +0000 UTC]
PfE Training Grounds critique is a GO!:
Man, I just don't see any flaws with this. I don't even have any nitpicks. You have a good use of perspective here, making that pumpkin tower look like it's towering. The light lines up with the pumpkins to give a good line for the eye to follow. Even the blurry grass in the foreground just adds more depth to this piece. There's always a way to improve a piece, but I sure can't find a way to do so with yours. Great job.
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SonicSketch In reply to LateCustomer [2013-10-14 21:24:41 +0000 UTC]
Flaweless, eh? Huh. Odd. We have two different views. XD
Anywho, thank ya kindly for your critique! I can agree with you that I can definitely improve, and I know practically all my flaws in this pic-- which, to my surprise, no one else seems to be seeing-- but if people like what I've done then I can't complain. Thanks again!
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LateCustomer In reply to SonicSketch [2013-10-15 07:03:18 +0000 UTC]
I don't know about "flawless", but I just didn't see any at the time I'm looking and I still don't see any major flaws. You're going to have to point out what you see. Keep in mind that I'm talking about big things that just don't work, not little things that could just be a matter of taste. For example, some folks might not like your rough, sketchy outlines (I usually draw using solid, usually black, deliberate lines), but that's not a flaw.
If it's an issue with colors, then you have me there as I'm colorblind, but as far as I can tell, everything still works.
I suppose one nitpick could be where AJ's front hooves are placed, but even then that's me stretching.
Seriously, I really like this piece.
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SlanderOptim7th [2013-10-12 05:32:56 +0000 UTC]
beautiful work, and speakin of pumpkins, this reminds me Nightmare Night is just around the corner.
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SonicSketch In reply to SlanderOptim7th [2013-10-12 14:20:02 +0000 UTC]
It is, indeed! In all honestly, I can't wait for it to arrive!
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Allonsbro [2013-10-11 16:18:31 +0000 UTC]
I have a sudden flashback to Skyward Sword when you have to help with the Pumpkin Harvest at the Lumpy Pumpkin.
Excellent use of lighting and shading
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CosmosoGurl In reply to Allonsbro [2013-10-12 03:38:45 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh yes haha lumpy pumpkin <3 <3 <3
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Allonsbro In reply to SonicSketch [2013-10-12 02:28:36 +0000 UTC]
Skyward Sword is the most recent Legend of Zelda game.
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SonicSketch In reply to Allonsbro [2013-10-12 02:57:30 +0000 UTC]
Aha, no wonder I didn't recognize the name. X3 I'm not into Zelda in any way, shape or form, so... yea. That explains that. XD
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Brother-Malachai In reply to Allonsbro [2013-10-12 02:41:05 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you have a mom that is so supportive of your Broniness.
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Brother-Malachai In reply to SonicSketch [2013-10-12 03:33:27 +0000 UTC]
They don't shun me...I just haven't told them yet. X-/
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