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Published: 2012-01-26 00:24:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 2378; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 0
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Description Amanda walks over to the railing on the balcony of the restaurant. She sighs as her eyes scan the shining expanse of the city. The cool air swirls through her blonde hair.

Damien: So... How'd you meet him?

Amanda turns. Damien is leaning against the threshold of the balcony doorway.

Amanda: (turns back towards the city) A friend set us up, then, she left us alone.

Damien: Hit and run, huh? I hate those.

Amanda: It isn't all bad. He's great conversation... and, he's funny. It's been a pretty good date. You could learn a thing or two from him.

Damien: (smiles) That again?

Amanda: (turns around and leans against the balcony) How about you and your date? You two are old friends?

Damien: Yeah... Rochelle was... pretty popular back in high-school. Let's just say I was more aware of her than she was of me. It was only chance we met again, six months ago. This is the first date we've ever been on.

Amanda: (Laughs sarcastically) Only six months, hun?

Damien: I'm a busy guy.

Amanda: I hope you're actually showing a lady a good time, this time, right?

Damien: As in...?

Amanda: "As in" Keeping work out of it. Not giving a lecture on how important what you do is and why.

Damien: I'm not that bad.

Amanda: (serious) You're kidding right? (laughs, leans forward) Damien, you're obsessed with work! I don't know if you realized it but most of your interactions with others lead to you proving your superiority over whoever you're with by expressing your greater abilities in the field of all sciences in some way! I'm willing to bet you did the same with every 'lucky' lady to be graced by your company.

Damien thinks back to events with Toni:"This is all hypothetical now. Trust me, nothings gonna happen if it isn't proven safe. Currently, we are at a crossroads. There are things that CAN be done now, but the question is... is it morally right?"

"Is it, Damien?"


With Roxanne: "No, no... I like that. I've never... met a scientist before... I mean, like, a real one. All the ones I hear about are those weird guys you see..."

"...Curing diseases and building the foundation that the very world we live in stands on? Very weird."


With Rochelle: "This is a sub-nuclear fusion engine. It emits no residual toxins and needs very little recharging. It powers this fine machine.... So, the whole expensive gas thing...? It really isn't a problem for me."

Amanda notices Damien is deep in thought.

Amanda: I'm right, aren't I? (sighs) Damien, I'm not trying to bust your balls, it's just... (sigh) You can be... kind of a prick sometimes. An interesting, genius, talented, accomplished, prick... and frankly, it's made even worse because... You don't even realize it. Do you?

Damien: (looks up at Amanda and smiles) Maybe so, but, it seems to have served me well so far. Unless I'm mistaken and none of the things you said to me earlier today can be taken as truth.

Amanda: What did I say to you?

Damien: Do I really need to repeat it? Your plea to me for a , what was it- an evening that wasn't "just business?" What was that about?

Amanda's jaw drops.

Damien: Hey. You're the one who said it. I'm just trying to interpret it's meaning.

Amanda: O.k. guy! Let's just tackle this head on right now. TAKE A GOOD LOOK AT ME BUDDY! Do I look like I need to beg a man for anything? I do not have, nor have I ever had trouble getting what I want when I want it, alright?!

Damien: I'm not suggesting anything, Mandy...

Amanda: Don't call me that, dude. Nobody calls me that. I hate that name!

Damien: Fine, Amanda- But, what was all that?

Amanda: (calms down) ...That was... god... That was... (thinks for a moment) ... O.k., that was nothing. What I meant was I wanted something better than a work briefing... on a date of all things. I was hoping I'd get a chance to know you better. I mean, that's what these things are for. ...And whatever else happens... well... happens.

Damien: (thinks back) Trust me, I know all about that. Amanda, I apologize. When things are right, I'll make it up to you. If you'll give me the chance.

Amanda: I'll hold you to that. 'Till then, I hope you don't mind if I play the field to fill the gaps...

Damien looks over his shoulder, Josh is headed back to the table. Amanda smiles.

Damien: Do what you must. The question is: Can he?

Amanda: (starts walking past Damien) If he plays the game, we'll see. Truth is, he's cool... (looks back at Damien) ...But, he's got none of your fire.

Damien watches with a smile as Amanda, and her ass, walk away.

Damien: (shakes his head) ...What a night.


BOOOOOM!!!!!

A deafening explosion rings in all ears as the dark night is illuminated by the fire of a hundred hells. Damien is nearly knocked off his feet as his eyes spread wide to take in the sight. An enormous cloud of fire and smoke rises to the heavens. Damien stands over an awakened city that never sleeps. As he gains his footing he hears a sound, a deep rumbling a throaty growl fills the night. Something has come to the city, something big.




(You know how she got in those pants...)
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Comments: 25

saminal625 [2012-01-29 20:48:11 +0000 UTC]

i rally like how the guy's face tunred out, is that Damien?

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tavaresg In reply to saminal625 [2012-01-29 23:42:05 +0000 UTC]

Yep!

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saminal625 In reply to tavaresg [2012-01-30 01:01:07 +0000 UTC]

nice! is this someone u know or some story that has yet to be read?

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tavaresg In reply to saminal625 [2012-01-30 03:40:36 +0000 UTC]

This a story I've been doing for a while now on this page.

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saminal625 In reply to tavaresg [2012-01-30 09:37:44 +0000 UTC]

nice man!

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J-Limit [2012-01-29 08:24:52 +0000 UTC]

ok i need to know about the shit thats hittin the fan now lol

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adony [2012-01-28 04:02:56 +0000 UTC]

Is it safe for a guy to think of other women when one is speaking to him? Could cost him a swift kick if he slips up (Calls her by the wrong name or whatev's)
BTW, looks like Amanda's Black from the waist down, ain't she?

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tavaresg In reply to adony [2012-01-28 05:23:56 +0000 UTC]

He's thinking more of the situations rather than the women. And...Yes, Amanda's got junk in her trunk.

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adony In reply to tavaresg [2012-01-28 06:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Now onto the cause of that explosion and how they're going to deal with it...

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tavaresg In reply to adony [2012-01-28 13:01:24 +0000 UTC]

Damien would certainly like to deal with Amanda's 'explosion.'

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ebony-chan [2012-01-26 14:11:49 +0000 UTC]

I liked the story a lot. One thing though her face look a bit hard and masculine, while the guys face looks a bit soft and feminine.

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tavaresg In reply to ebony-chan [2012-01-26 22:16:55 +0000 UTC]

I don't think so. I have altered it anyway.

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ebony-chan In reply to tavaresg [2012-01-26 22:26:43 +0000 UTC]

I see the womans face looks nice better. You should do a novel or comic about these characters. I would totally buy it.

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Geeflakes-art [2012-01-26 10:15:52 +0000 UTC]

What's this Boom !! D:


PS : Oooh yes I jnow how she get in those pants >:3 )

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Benin6man [2012-01-26 08:58:02 +0000 UTC]

DAMN IT! Why.... why the cliffhanger...???
Ahhh, I wanna see what happens next. I can't wait!!!

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FalishaAnn [2012-01-26 05:32:04 +0000 UTC]

Awww how can you leave us with this cliffhanger!!! Ahh this is getting too good.

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00ji [2012-01-26 02:38:33 +0000 UTC]

nice and clean artwork, I'm digging it

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Artistik-Bootya [2012-01-26 00:43:12 +0000 UTC]

NICE

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ThePoeticPaladin [2012-01-26 00:24:56 +0000 UTC]

Words.

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tavaresg In reply to ThePoeticPaladin [2012-01-26 00:35:32 +0000 UTC]

What? What do you mean?

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ThePoeticPaladin In reply to tavaresg [2012-01-26 01:00:48 +0000 UTC]

I can see them.

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tavaresg In reply to ThePoeticPaladin [2012-01-26 01:03:48 +0000 UTC]

What?

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ThePoeticPaladin In reply to tavaresg [2012-01-26 01:11:06 +0000 UTC]

There are words above here.

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tavaresg In reply to ThePoeticPaladin [2012-01-26 01:18:24 +0000 UTC]

What do you think about them?

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ThePoeticPaladin In reply to tavaresg [2012-01-26 01:27:31 +0000 UTC]

That they are many in number.

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