Comments: 16
KrisLalev [2018-12-02 12:16:24 +0000 UTC]
An absolute fantastic and very accurately design art!!! The details are seemingly simple but so right and amazing and the color contrast wins a lot of points!!
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Fallerium [2018-12-01 22:44:45 +0000 UTC]
Hi !! I'm from ProjectComment <3
I love what you did here with the colors. It compliments each other well the values are pretty good too with the dark gray and white mixing with each other. A thing I find a problem is the poor lighting. Though the colors are great, the lighting makes it look less than it actually is if you know what I mean. A good solution to this is to have white light instead of yellow light since yellow lighting can change the tone of your drawing. The best way to have decent lighting is to put some sources of white light on both sides of your drawing and take the picture from the middle. (Or you can use a scanner if you'd like.)
Overall, I think the head shape is pretty decent regardless of the thin muzzle and odd ears (Though they aren't much a problem.) The head compared to the torso and legs are a little misproportioned, though I can see you were going for a chibi kind of look. A solution to this is to look at what other artists do with their chibis and study how you can incorporate that into yours instead of making it look sort of like a baby wolf. Anyway, I hope this helped ! I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future <3
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AStormyBoi [2018-12-01 20:39:24 +0000 UTC]
Hi there from ProjectComment
I would love to tell you what I think of Emily Since I draw animal often I feel like I can give you some insight on this.
Okay so to start off, I really like her overall design, all the colours go very nice together and the blue streaks of fur keep it from not being just a grey wolf so good job on that! Her eye specifically is also very nice and the purple defiantly stands out.
Another thing I would like to point out is that I really like all the fur you added stick out of her coat, it shows that she has fluff and also help to make her not look so flat so keep that up as well
As I'm checking out Sophia I noticed they do have a lot in common design wise but still keep their differences which is good otherwise it would get confusing and boring. And if Im correct, one is a wolf and one is a cat? So if you ever draw them together make sure they are not the same size (unless Emily is a baby or something but still watch the size difference of a wolf vs a cat)
All in all though Emily's design is very nice and thoroughly thought through
However, If I were to point out a few hing that I hope can help you it would be:
1.) as I'm looking at your style of drawing I noticed it's indefinably a chibi look, meaning their heads are usually larger than their bodies. This is okay and I too have a sort of chibi look with a lot of my drawings but, you do have to be careful not to make the head too big or the body proportioning is lost. In this drawing the head seems almost too big for the rest of her body and neck.
As an example, if this were a figure it would possible top forward due to the balance being off. SO just watch that and possible make her head smaller or her body larger
2.) Don't make the nose too long, it can also take away the proportions of the facial area, with the hair being there it balances it out so in this case it plenty fine but with wolfs/dogs you may draw without the large sum of hair on their head, possibly shorten the snout so It does not look like a weasel or something
Really though this character is very nice and if it's going to be hinging around another character I do wonder how she will develope as time moves on? I really like your style and you should defiantly keep it up
you can only improve ^-^
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Maladys-Market [2018-12-01 20:04:32 +0000 UTC]
This is so cute!
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lepidolitecharolette [2018-12-01 16:45:24 +0000 UTC]
Really nice colors but is she supposed to be really short like a corgi, cause if not the legs are way too small.
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