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regboross [2018-12-18 12:31:52 +0000 UTC]
This picture.... is very good, i really like it. Different is good. <3
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TheDarkEmperess [2018-12-14 20:33:13 +0000 UTC]
This picture....is different and cute.
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M4ttytheBBL [2018-12-14 18:29:45 +0000 UTC]
Hey, cool art! ^^
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ordinaryredtail [2018-12-13 15:15:19 +0000 UTC]
Hi there! I really, really love your character's design and your use of multimedia! I don't see it a lot, and I myself love using different mediums and exploring them... own it and don't stop experimenting! The first thing I would change is definitely the camera issue... I'm not sure what resources you have, but I have found that phone cameras are far better than those on computers. If you can, scanner! A higher quality image would make it easier to get more accurate feedback for sure. ^^ I'll try to answer your questions to be best of my ability, though!
It's kinda hard to see the background due to the photo quality... but from here it looks good! Maybe push for more contrast, look at galaxy images for reference! Same with the body proportions -- reference reference reference! If you want, I can try to red-line it later for you.
For changes, I'd definitely push shading and contrast more. Use some darker colors on the character, make sure you use a light source in the image, and don't shade in black! I'd use a dark purple for your dark shading color on the wolf.
Your art style is good! ^^ All in all, this is really nicely done!
-- with ProjectComment
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Featherflamestar [2018-12-13 15:06:11 +0000 UTC]
The legs and wings are too small in comparison to the body. Even if your character didn't have wings, if she tried to jump off a rock or anything, she'd wind up dislocating a shoulder or completely breaking the leg, as your leg structure is too thin and weak to support the weight of the body. And your wings are too small to even get lift from the ground, let alone support your wolf in the air. What I'd recommend is looking at pictures of eagles and hawks in flight, and pictures of wolves standing still. Then tweak the standing wolf to accomodate for the wings, because said wolf should be flying in most poses, correct?
But on a happier note, the anatomy is actually rather well done besides the legs and wings, and I absolutely love your style.
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CheerBeast123 In reply to Featherflamestar [2018-12-13 15:08:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! The wing this is weird because I never really draw wings so thanks for the advice. I tried to not make the legs to fat.
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Crocutate [2018-12-13 14:56:27 +0000 UTC]
This looks really beautiful!
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eve1202 [2018-12-13 14:51:25 +0000 UTC]
I really like this! The background looks awesome! I think her hind legs should be a bit bigger, and maybe the photo could be clearer, but your art style is cool!
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CheerBeast123 In reply to eve1202 [2018-12-13 14:53:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I will work on better/clearer images!
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eve1202 In reply to CheerBeast123 [2018-12-13 14:56:05 +0000 UTC]
no problem! keep doing your awesome art!
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Metalmaster1999 [2018-12-13 14:50:19 +0000 UTC]
that has to be without of doubt the most beautiful creature I've ever seen on deviantart. keep up the good work.
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chrisbrotto [2018-12-13 14:38:42 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful! It really shows the hard work you put into this piece.
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AStormyBoi [2018-12-13 03:49:50 +0000 UTC]
oo I love the background! O:
this looks absolutely amazing! Well done ^^
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ShadyStuffz [2018-12-13 00:30:43 +0000 UTC]
OH, WOW!!!! THAT IS AMAZE!!
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