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MewTwoPlays [2018-10-11 15:30:05 +0000 UTC]
I think I know what happened...
CENSORED FOR SPOILER REASONS
That's what happened!
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CJCroen [2018-06-11 00:20:28 +0000 UTC]
Aww, I think it's kinda sweet that Red doesn't want Ghost to kill his mom!
But what exactly happened to Red? Did he leave or did he jump out the window to kill himself out of guilt?
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CherlnIDA In reply to CJCroen [2018-11-12 18:36:11 +0000 UTC]
Actually when I wrote this, I thought of Red's mom being dead from the start, so she's reliving her afterlife of suffering and never seeing Red again. She was meant to cry and say "purgatory" but that was cut. But I like seeing readers come up with numerous interpretations of what did happen, they could all have been of what transpired. ^_^
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CJCroen In reply to CherlnIDA [2018-11-12 20:04:26 +0000 UTC]
Ah. Still interesting and kinda sad.
I like it ^_^
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Crystaldragons In reply to CherlnIDA [2012-06-09 22:12:48 +0000 UTC]
Yea I did, it gives me another idea as to why red left
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Suprememessage [2011-07-06 01:23:10 +0000 UTC]
Maybe red was like "I don't believe in trolls" and the magical power of ghost's magnets dragged him away to never never land and he got killed by captain hook.
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CrispyCreamed [2011-06-26 04:02:23 +0000 UTC]
I really like it (:
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XxxOceanXSapphirexxX [2010-12-17 22:40:01 +0000 UTC]
W-wait... What happened to Red now? o_o Did he run away to safe his mom, our did that... 'Thing' get him?
Poor Red...
Poor Red's Mom...
Poor Door...
...Wait I lost the line... *knifed*
Great Story btw.
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FoxMccloud15 [2010-12-07 03:12:34 +0000 UTC]
You are right, purgatory made it sound like those perfume ads I never understand. :/ XD
Great short btw.
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CherlnIDA In reply to FoxMccloud15 [2010-12-07 03:14:18 +0000 UTC]
You make me sad I thought it'd be super creepy if I added it.
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da07pokemon24 [2010-12-05 22:11:37 +0000 UTC]
Wow, awesome (and creepy,) story O.o
Except that the last word totally ruined the mood. I'm not that old (13), and a Dane, so how am I suposed to know what "Purgatory" is? It kinda ruined the story for me :/ (It's like saying 'Pie Factory', it just doesn't make sense)
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CherlnIDA In reply to da07pokemon24 [2010-12-05 22:34:00 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I'm sorry, I'm willing to edit it out if you want. xD
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da07pokemon24 In reply to CherlnIDA [2010-12-06 11:21:12 +0000 UTC]
Nah, it's fine. Now I know what it is anyway xD
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WorldTraveler128 [2010-11-19 06:05:25 +0000 UTC]
man i think i cried ;u;
awsome man just awsome.
Whuts purgatory anyways?
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Charlesthefrog4 [2010-09-29 23:06:16 +0000 UTC]
This both disturbs and saddens me. I belive that you have accomplished your mission. Good job!
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Shadonut [2010-09-28 04:37:45 +0000 UTC]
i don't realy get it, explain?
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CherlnIDA In reply to Shadonut [2010-09-29 00:03:19 +0000 UTC]
Well, it's not really that hard if you think about the creepypasta story involving GHOST in your party when you use curse. Someone, like a trainer, dies. And remember at the near the end at the house where you don't see your mom? This is my idea of it, that's she ended up being cursed and she's in an endless purgatory to repeat what happened over and over.
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Shadonut In reply to CherlnIDA [2010-09-29 22:40:06 +0000 UTC]
i havn'trad any pastas or played PkMn Black...
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CherlnIDA In reply to Shadonut [2010-09-29 22:54:06 +0000 UTC]
No, no, not the recent game pokemon black. I mean the creepypasta of the hacked Red game called Pokemon Lost or Creepy Black. xD
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GengarGirlCat [2010-09-26 17:55:40 +0000 UTC]
oooo i liek me a good creepy story :3
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riflow [2010-09-26 00:04:35 +0000 UTC]
Ah, the edited/hacked pokemon games?
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riflow In reply to CherlnIDA [2010-09-26 00:08:54 +0000 UTC]
No wonder it was creepy.
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