Comments: 18
craftsbyblue [2016-12-26 15:07:37 +0000 UTC]
Hi, I'm a fellow member of ProjectComment, here to critique this lovely piece!
This is a really beautiful scene, I love the amount of detail you put into the background and character! I think that this piece could benefit from stronger lighting, such as adding more highlights to the cloak as violetice mentioned. Additionally, I suggest blending the rocks in the scene a bit more, perhaps making some of them more jagged to add more variety to the highlighting and shading; this will allow the rocks to have a level of detail that's similar to the leaves you drew. This tutorial may help with the rocks. Finally, the waterfall area looks a bit rushed - the water and foliage on the top isn't blended as throughly as the rest of the drawing. Since these waterfalls appear to be small and spread out, there will probably be areas where the rock can be seen through the water. For this, I suggest using photo references that are similar to the scene you want to draw (or the shape/strength of the waterfall, maybe this one will help).
I hope my critique is helpful to you, and hope you have a wonderful holiday!
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Erynnia In reply to craftsbyblue [2016-12-26 15:14:55 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the critique!
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animeteaparty [2016-10-05 17:21:25 +0000 UTC]
I wanna be there
*tries to get into the screen ....I can't!!
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Erynnia In reply to animeteaparty [2016-10-05 20:48:03 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thank you! I'm glad you like it!
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violetice [2016-09-26 23:42:21 +0000 UTC]
This is a really cool scene! I really like the texture and detail of the leaves on the left side. I think if you applied a similar amount of detail to other areas, it would help tighten up the overall image. If you want the figure to be the main focal point, I think it would help to add some back light on the cape/cloak, like along the left side to make the figure pop.
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Erynnia In reply to violetice [2016-09-27 00:47:25 +0000 UTC]
Awesome, thank you so much! I will definitely keep your tips in mind as I do my next painting.
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vetrvr [2016-09-25 21:21:10 +0000 UTC]
Looks good, but a little smudgy. I'd also refine the edges a bit.
Sorry for the critique. Just trying to help.
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mb67 [2016-09-25 06:47:47 +0000 UTC]
This is just so lovely looking!
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AlwysbCreative [2016-09-24 23:19:08 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous! Love the colors and the detail! -^^-
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