HOME | DD
faile35 — Vision Impaired Page17
Published: 2007-05-22 04:05:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 15977; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 587
Redirect to original
Description
If you're following this series in order, click here next ."Thanks! And come again!"
Note that the door to the wagon is several steps above the ground, and there is a small step-ladder there for access. Zirena is now standing below the step-ladder, her feet on the ground.
And, for those keeping track, at this point (Page17) in "Rats" Valerin was firmly in the gremlins' control, just prior to the stripping sequence [link] . At this point in "Plot," Avora was just beginning to feel the might of the tendrilinguis' endless vines/roots [link] . And in "Harvest," Deirdre was just about to embark on her ill-fated investigation of the cellars [link] . Length-wise, I believe "Vision Impaired" will be around 40 pages, so you can make your predictions about what's to come and when with that in mind...
The stock model for Zirena here is Adeline Debaire, also known as perditax31. Write her a note and tell her what a good job she has done on these reference photos I'm using, some of which are posted in her gallery.
Enjoy!
Related content
Comments: 54
Thanks! Yes, that hand does look a bit claw like, although I was going more for "Toodleloo!" than "Scratch your eyes out, bitch." 
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Yeah, this particular serie is quite slow, yet makes me become more and more curious. It is getting more serious, but less damsel in distress.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
The damsel-in-distress portion will show up soon enough... 
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Wait..
" At this point in "Plot," Avora was just beginning to feel the might of the tendrilinguis' endless vines/roots [link] . And in "Harvest," Deirdre was just about to embark on her ill-fated investigation of the cellars [link] ."
Doesn't the plot in Fair Harvest story runs linear? I mean, Avora got captured first, and then Deirdre began her actions right?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Yes. My comment that you quoted was just to give the viewer a chance to see where each chapter is at around Page17, so they can consider the pacing of each of the different chapters. With the exception of the dreams and flashback images, the storyline IS linear, as you assumed.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
And may the next Customer please make there way into the small and secluded Caravan where a lone woman awaits.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Oh no, don't mind the tall muscle heavy bloke with the club. He's decoration.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Great pic! I like her expression, almost dull but good in that sense!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
You do such an amazing job with the facial expressions on all of your pictures. I have such a hard time with faces and shading. Hopefully I will continue to improve and one day rival you!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Keep going, and I'm sure you will.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I can't help but feel her mysterious/professional mien is about to nosedive like a brick with wings.
Otherwise I can't really think of anything to say about this one except: "Zirena pretty."
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Okay, so here's an attempt to remember exactly what I said:
Luther looks like he's making grabby hands -- I hope he wasn't taught the same social skills as Jervil and believes that using the "booby-trap" is the proper way to greet an old female friend.
I'm really liking how her outfit has turned out looking in these pictures so far, my only "complaint" is that her corset laces are hard to see, and for this picture I had to strain to find them.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Thanks! I've tried to lighten and emphasize her corset strings a bit more because of this comment. And Luther does have somewhat of a soft heart for her, in that he won't resort to the whole "booby trap" scenario until after she proves that there's no other way to deal with her...
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Man, beautiful drawing. You're getting better and better! (not that you were bad to begin with!)
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Awsome job. Her eyes looks like something else has caught her attention.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Well, I'm thinking that, while she is saying goodbye to Mr. Turnip Farmer, she is also aware of Luther approaching the wagon. So, her eyes would probably carry some of what you suggest. Thanks!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Beware the person in the background! BEWARE! Really nice pic!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Yes, the old "Looming Figure" trick. I use it a lot...
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Brillant! I love her fingers in the wave. The look on her face is great.
Oooo what will Luther say to her? You mentioned they had history. I wonder if they are on good terms. She seems to be a very fierce woman.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Thank you! Yes, they have a bit of a history. Are they on good terms? By now you've seen the next few pictures and know they aren't. However, I think I will try and write up a bit of their conversation on Pages 20 and 21 so people can be "in on it."
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
It seems that this was the last "run of the mill" customer for some time.
Although the next one seems to be lurking just around the corner. I hope he is distinguished enough to announce his presence in a fashionable way instead of popping around the corner like a punch on a spring and give fair madame a heartattack like experience.
But if he is really intending about doing this Luther (if he really is the mysterious half hidden figure) has good chace to get clobbered down by a turnip swung by a combative fortune teller. From the her habit and look she certainly has the guts to do it.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Yup, you guessed this one pretty well. Luther believes that he doesn't need to announce his presence--thinking that she probably already knows he's coming. And, as seen on Page18, he's right.
Thanks!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Didn't think to mention this earlier, I can't do fabric, and I like your rendering of scarf-stuff coming off her wrist.
Also, a question-have you ever considered printing half of the saga early, and the second half later? I can see a lot of fanatics grabbing up the first half already. Me too, soon as I get Paypal......
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Thank you! And to answer your question: Yes, I have considered trying to print this in installments. Essentially, there will be three parts to it (like the old "Book One, Book Two, Book Three" trick so many novels pull these days. However, it is likely that not all of the images will take a full page, and until I know the overall length, I'm going to have to hold on that. Don't fret, though; I imagine that by December of 2007 I should be closing in on the third part, and I'll know a whole lot more about what to expect and pursue in the whole publishing regard.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Amazing pic, as usual. I like the expression on her face. She looks so...calculating.
I have a question though: where has the turnip gone ?!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
It's in her left hand, off-page.
Thanks!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
*mysterious creepy voice* Beware the Turnip of Doom ! Bewaaaaare !
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
arg i cant choose between avora or her as my fav characters. i mean come on its not like you could possibly throw in more sexy ladies......actually do it! do it until a black hole opens up from the mass quantity of awesome this series has that sucks in all attention
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Well, I'm glad you like both of them. I like to hear that people have favorites, since it means that the heroines are all different and have their own unique style and appeal. Thanks! "Mass quantity of awesome" sure has a nice ring to it...
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
YAY! I'm not the only one who is ogling her hips!
I mean... um... I do no such thing!
👍: 0 ⏩: 2
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Heehee! They're fabulous!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Every story needs to have a killer vegetable...
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Ah, it is all comming into place.
Can't wait to see what this all means.
👍: 0 ⏩: 2
The ending will likely be like all the ladies end up.
👍: 0 ⏩: 2
We will have to make a photo of the whole group at that point!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
A group shot will definitely be coming.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
| Next =>