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Published: 2005-03-21 14:09:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 142; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 132
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Hm o_o Another poor quality image... But hey, I was moving this weekend, so I'm glad I got to scan something!Aaaanywho... Um, yes, it's a sketch of my card for the OMU (Online Manga University) playing cards thing. Yup, not a fairy!!!! People keep telling me (well, just two people...) she looks like a fairy!
One more thing, the wings aren't meant to fly! They're two halves of the spade symbol. She's floating! I know her feet aren't in the most comfortable position! ~Yue-Xumeragi wouldn't stop complaining about it O_O Please, don't tell me her chest ain't big, I already know that. I don't do huge boobs...
Ok, comments and crits appreciated!
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Medium: mechanical pencil 0.5
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Enjoy!
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Comments: 3
Like the folks in OMU said, there's something wrong with the thighs. But I think the whole length looks too long and skinny as if constructed only with bones. Maybe it's really just your stylization but even so it doesn't seem right. Especially the knee part where it does not appear to actually have a joint, rather it's just a bend. I also spotted that the raised arm may is a bit larger than the other and the elbow joint further away than the other.
Other than that, the idea looks good but perhaps the card composition is too wide.
Keep it up
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Don't worry about the composition, I can modify it in PS at any time. The symbols in the corners were just to get an idea of what how it would look as a whole.
I can't really see what's wrong with the thighs 
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