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naviechance — Star Fox Sagas: 1-21
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This page really took some time. Lots of action, lots of Arwings, lots of OH MY GOD I CAN'T COME UP WITH A BETTER LASER SOUND EFFECT THAN "PEW PEW."I fail.
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oh, its alright.. i probably wouldve just made the picture of a laser. not very good with sound effects, either. lol
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Hey don't sweat it. How many lasers do you actually hear, and so long as you get the message across that the lasers are firing then it should be fine. Oh and you seem to worry about updating, well yes apologize if it took a long time but don't put yourself down. If people are interested they'll wait, if not then who cares right?
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Here's the sounds I would use:
Laser charging: DZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
Laser firing: VZHMMM
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dude were is krystal?! You can't have star fox without krystal
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i demand you take that back pew pew is the best lazer sound effect their is
btw nice comic
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PEW PEW.
I can't believe I never commented on this. >:/
Okay....here I am.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
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very nice, good expressions. Love the "i've got a bad feeling about this." line Very well down! u actually made me NOT want to kill slippy! congrats no one has done that. totally solid plot! and I love the style! i wish the ACTUAL star fox looked like this! I also hope that star wolf is brought in! ^^ but overall pretty FRAKING AWESOME!
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this is badass.you should definatly keep going with this.cant wait for the next one's.it must be hard to make these so we know youve got the talent to keep it on.
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Coooll!!
I'm just getting into the SF fandom, But I really like how you draw here (Hell, youre great!)
Don't worry about the sfx, the Scifi effects are very though to make in words
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Wow!! Cool!
Ah.. the epic pew pew...
Can't wait to see what happens next!!
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"Pew pew" XD Sounds are hard to, uh, create, know what I mean? Japanese are good with that.
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Well, on the other hand, you could "hang a lampshade" on it...
Fox: "Pew pew"? Why the heck do our lasers sound like that?
Slippy: Trust me, Fox, if anybody knew, we would've fixed it by now...
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if only Peppy were there..."He's quick! Be careful!"
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and don't forget.
"Do a F****** Barrel ROLL!!!"
awesome page navie!
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Oh and "Use bombs wisely!!" Can't forget that either XD
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Hee, hee! ...Pew, pew... XD
Anyways, I'm still liking this comic very, very much, naviechance. Fight scenes in comics are very hard to put together, and it's apparent that you're trying pretty hard. Good work again.
...BUT WHY DID FOX TRUST SLIPPY, OF ALL PEOPLE, WITH MURROW?!
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Yay! Maybe in latet chapters u can come up with a Fox/Krystal private make out sessions! Just spit ballin' here! Keep it up!
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Simply excellent!
Interesting too, that Fox still considers Murrow a priority worth protecting rather than bait for the trap--perhaps he has a better idea of it.
Can't wait for the next one!
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Well, Fox is still a hero at heart. He's not the type to abandon someone who's in trouble, y'know? ^^
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Haha, of course not! That's our hero~
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You don't need "pew-pew". Sound doesn't exist in space.
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Wow, the laser blasts look really cool. 
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Dude super sweet, though Fox looks a little too old
but then again you got their ages (Gee, what is the matter with this key board, oops sorry,) wrong. where are you geting your info? 
as for laser sound effects try, "tzew"
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cool! and pew pew better than zzzzzzap zzzzzzap....
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Awesome! I'd buy this outta manga shop for sure. And how about KA-BLAMO!.... I don't know just throwing it out there...
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The comic is beautiful and very well illustrated.
The descrip: "lots of OH MY GOD I CAN'T COME UP WITH A BETTER LASER SOUND EFFECT THAN "PEW PEW."
Made me laugh.
I agree sound effects are tricky. But it's really so small and the rest of the comic makes up for it.
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Ah, but "Pew Pew" is classic! D:
But yes, this is awesome. <3
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This definitely made my day better. As soon as I saw that you made this, my heart jumped for joy, but then I had to get him back down. You keep me coming back for more!
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What a wonderful work on the Arwings! Good job! It took you a lot of time but the result is worth
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As always, very good job here! Digging the face expressions on Falco and Fox. Actually, I thought the "pew, pew" sound effect was rather neat.. it made me think of Star Wars
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Bah, pew-pew SFX only adds to the win of the comic, Sarah. ^^ Besides, sci-fi SFX like engines and lasers are tough to quantify in words, >.>
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pritty epic!
oh and some good laser sounds are like "Ba-Vam" and "Ka-Choom"... maybe those are more heavy cannons.
but yeah those are ideas.
but pew is a good one for smaller lasers... I couldn't think of anything else like that.
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That was....That was..... WONDERFUL! You did a good job.
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Try 'Vwit vwit vwit" or "Choom choom choom."
Or, "Pshoom Pshoom"
God, I fail too!
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I love the way you draw Falco's side profile! 
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no you don't fail...that's awesome! I like how you are still going on with this, your doing really well i must say. keep up the good work!
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