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naviechance — Star Fox Sagas: 1-23
Published: 2008-12-03 04:20:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 24715; Favourites: 102; Downloads: 1531
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For this page, I remembered my KISS rule - that is, "keep it simple, stupid." So I tried to drastically simplify in order to increase productivity. As far as getting it done quicker, it worked... but I'm not really happy with how this page came out. Krystal and Falco look kinda off =\[ first page ] [ back ] [ next ]
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Comments: 51
I think you've got the characters down pat. You're portraying their personalities really well. Spot-on, actually
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I don't care much for the simplification. When I first saw it, I wondered where the texture had gone. Keeping the extra detail adds to the realism. But other than that, kudos; I LOVE this series you've done. It's honestly one of the best pieces of Star Fox fan art I've ever seen.
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they look fine! Krystal and Falco are perfect!
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Gah, I love this; I just recently got back into my old nostalgic-StarFox games and I'm glad I came across this!
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Heya, just wanted to say that I stumbled on your comic by pure chance and only wish I had found it sooner! Just finished reading all the pages you got so far and am eagerly waiting to see more in the future, though Im quite well aware of a tiny little thing getting in the way, something called 'real life'
I myself only recendly have only begun to be a Star Fox fan. I mean, throughour the years I've seen them now and then, caught a screenshot or two from them, along with a fanart here on DA, though it was only last weekend that out of the blue I decided to properly study them, and before I knew it, I found myself becoming a fan, after doing a little reading on wikipedia and watching vids on youtube. Hell, I even wanna write a fanfic!
And I dont even own a gamecube!
Maybe its mostly because im a big space fan, I played Wing Commander A LOT.
Ah, anyway, sorry about al that ramble.
Bottom line, love your comic, think you do the characters amazingly well, and I got a sneaky feeling this all is more then just some insurance fraud.
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I just started reading this comic today, and I think it's fantastic ^.^
I love the way you draw and the plot so far..
Can't wait till the next page
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Well, I read all the pages you have so far and I loved it! ^^ Hope to see more one day. And yes, I know, youre busy and thats understandable :3 but like I said. I loved the comic :3
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Awesome comics, the great art, story and dialogue had me hooked.
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Awesome so far. I like your spare and semi-pointy style with the same greys. The characters look great, as well. Keep it up!
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You made Krystal look awesome!! And Falco looks fine.
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they sure look strange from the other one's, but its ok
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Sorry I accidently sent that twice for some wierd reason.
I'm sorry for being a whiny bitch on those too.
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There's nothing wrong with Falco. he looks fine. But Krystal, oi! She looks like Kat Monroe. Her hairs too dark and it isn't seperated into thick strands like you drew in earlier pages.
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There's nothing wrong with Falco. he looks fine. But Krystal, oi! She looks like Kat Monroe. Her hairs too dark and it isn't seperated into thick strands like you drew in earlier pages.
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Kinda looks like Krystal dyed her hair. 'Course, having deep-blue hair in a grayscale comic is gonna lead to some problems.
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Krystal looks okay, but I think Falco's beak is a little short, and his eyes look kind of weird to me for some reason. *shrugs*
Either way, great job, keep it up!
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i love this comic. just enough said. i love starfox, sonic, and Jak and daxter. Keep up the great work i love it. it looks like a real authentic.
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I think the page looks awesome! Keep up the great work!
And to be honest, I can't really tell!
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I have a question. How the name of Hell does one make one of those comic things? i don't get it. (epic fail) i've tried like a billion times and I STILL haven't gotten absolutley anywhere! any clues?
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Er, I start by making up a story, them doing thumbnails of every page to plot them out, then I just... draw them. There's really not that much to it, and everyone has a different method.
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Oh. Well..... I guess I just suck.
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Keep up the good work. 
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YES this is begining to get real good right now keep up the work
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You can always count on Falco to make smart remarks while he's getting shot at. Always.
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Isn't that what he's really there for? ACE PILOT MY BUTT, HE'S ALWAYS GETTING SHOT. XD
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No crap there. Imagine the day they save YOU from getting shot? HAHAHA That'll never happen. Ever.
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I love the way you distribute the panels, it's such a hard work...
Hah, Krystal's female instinct, I suposse
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Another great page! Well, that's certainly a powerful motivation.. I can now see why Lydia wanted to pay Team Star Fox so much money to recover his body (Despite Krystal feeling her coldness earlier).
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Besides, Lydia can't be trusted.
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Oh, certainly not
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I also agree about Krystal black hair... ^_^U Maybe Falco's beak is too... parrot-like? Anyway, Falco looks fine too me like that, is a more personal way of drawing him. <3
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Well played! I knew that lady was up to no good.
I agree with whoever said Krystal doesn't suit the jet black hair. That aside, nicely drawn page!
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... and it's weird that I got them confused, because the cat has WHITE hair, not black. (My memory is inverted apparently)
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Krystal looks weird with glossy Black Hair. If it weren't for the head ornament (I don't know what that's called), I wouldn't have even thought it was her. I thought it was the character that hired them at first.
... Falco looks fine to me though.
*Pew Pew*
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Don't you love dirty business? *sarcasm*
Another great page, navie. Yes, Krystal and Falco do seem a little off, but hell, if you can draw 'em that well, I've got no complaints.
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I hope Krystal kicks that Lydia's ass. Go Krystal!!!
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I'm with ya. Go get her, girl!! Lydia is just another greedy scum who only cares about money.
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Yeah. I was reading what Krystal explained to Fox. I said this in my mind, "What a greedy bitch." lol
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Got that right. All I can say is that in the next several pages, they're going to have a nice long "chat" with Lydia.
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Oh yeah!! Get her, Krystal.
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do you remember that actor from...
naw JK.
I like it!
interesting plot.
it all makes sense!
keep it up!
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YES!! Krystal is in time to help the team and to kick ass. Keep up the good work, hun. ^^
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