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naviechance — Star Fox Sagas: 1-25
Published: 2009-02-23 05:09:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 15969; Favourites: 87; Downloads: 195
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...Can I be honest?I really hate how this came out.
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story and artwork © navie
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If Fox and the others saw Mrs. Murrow in person:
Crystal (with her team and the officers after they found out the fraud): (sarcastically) Hi there.
Mrs. Murrow (with a look of defeat): Oh darn...
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why? camera flashes, froggy news anchor, ruff-ruff police taking her away, what is not to like?
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Not exactly sure what you dislike abot the page, but I agree that we self-hate all the time about our things lol ^^
Nice worl on your comics, I enjoy reading them and hope to continue that. 6/5^^
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Hmm, looks like case closed for Mrs. Murrow!
(Or IS it?)
At any rate, nice transition page!
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Great comics btw
How do you draw the arwings and do the special effects such as lasers on photoshop?
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I draw most of the lasers with the pen tool, then just fill it with white, duplicate it, and blur one of them. The Arwings are draw using screenshots from Star Fox Assault as a reference.
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do u mean when you draw the arwings, you draw them on photoshop?
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No, I do the entire page start to finish in Photoshop. Then Pen Tool is a vector tool I use to make the lines crisp.
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Looks pretty decent to me. And hey, you can always redraw it later when you get better.
Something tells me this isn't the end... there's probably much more to this...
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Why do you alwase say your pages suck? I think these are sweet. stop beating yourself up.
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I'm an artist. We're professional self-haters ^^
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The first panel is lovely, in my opinion.
Oh snap, she got arrested! Also, the dialog for the news report is really good. Nice work!
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i think it came out good. sure its a big cliff hanger at the end but otherwise an all out nice comic.
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Nah I like this page a lot =]. Is it because you went back to the gray or just because of the style you made it in. (or nether)
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It's because I'm spending less time on it. I have to chose between quality and quantity on these - If I spend forever on it, it looks great, but I can only do like one a month =\
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Oh I see. But I still think it looks great. I love the style you do your characters in. It looks fancy. Way different than a lot of stuff I see.
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Well... it's a bridge comic. Not "really" meant to be an enormous statement of incredible artistry. It serves its purpose and looks great doing it. Nice job navie
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i've enjoyed the comic so far i say keep working at it and don't give up ^^ keep working at it im rooting for ya so keep working and updating :3
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The panel with Lydia looks cool~~ I did spot a couple of typing errors though, such as "the Lydia Murrows" and "renowed" which should be "renowned" but other than that, great work as always ^^
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OH SNAP SPELLING ERRORS. My spellcheck failed me DX~
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Hate it?! You should love it. What part did you hate? I love everything!!!
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I think you're being too hard on yourself because this pic is done very well, especially the paneling, the dialogue, the proportion, the camera angles and everything about it. You did very well, be happy with yourself! You deserve to be happy with this piece because it's fabulous. Great work. =3
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Hmm.. I wonder, what is it you disllke about this page? I particularly find the art and inking (especially on the top panel) to be quite lovley. Is it more with the general theme/storytelling of the page you dislike, or something in your linework?
Regardless, I've always found with my work, that there's bound to be times we feel like we've made mistakes.. and it helps us impove in the future
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wait, you hate the last panel or the entire strip?
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You always seem to hate nearly all your pages. I understand you gotta feel like you gotta improve, but c'mon....
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Bit of a sudden conclusion, assuming that it is.
Also, Interpol? Didn't know Corneria was british
The first two panels are nicely done though, but the third...
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The page is not so bad, dearie!
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weee, I've been watching CSI shows so much lately, this page helped me reminense (sp?)
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It's great, hun. At least now we finally see her being arrested.
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I agree with you there. That crazy cat bitch deserves that. ^_^
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Oh yeah. 
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I think it looks awesome. Especially that first panel; it's gorgeous <3
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Thanks, I'm actually happy with the first panel ^^
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Someone's being too hard on themself...
Even if you're not pleased with it, I'm eager to find out what happens next
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Even thought you hate it, I think it's cool.
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