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noodle-soup — This Is What Kills Me
Published: 2007-01-13 08:09:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 140; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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The crushing weight of my heart,Against your palm must kill you.
Heavy scars are etched,
Where our love was sketched,
And the pain will slowly consume.
The absence of your very heart,
Against my palm is what kills me.
No love sought my soul,
That’s nowhere near whole,
But clearly you’re failing to see.
The acid of my tears,
Against your skin must kill you.
Countless heart shatters,
Though it doesn’t matter,
Because you caring will never ensue.
The invisible tears,
Against my skin is what kills me.
The non existent caress,
I expected no less,
From the breaker that you’ll always be.
The poisoned words from my lips,
Against your senses must kill you.
These horrors I speak,
Is what’s made me weak,
When you’ve lied that you’re falling too.
The venom of your very breathing,
Against my senses is what kills me.
The scars that you left,
From your undeserved breath,
Are engraved in the heart that I keep.
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Comments: 16
Heavy scars are etched,
Where our love was sketched,
I love this
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this is good. its easy to tell how you feel from this.
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nightmares give me the inspiration to write my poems sometimes
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Actual nightmares? Or a nightmare situation.
This was inspired by a nightmare situation
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Actual nightmares. I don't have the courage to create a nightmare situation.
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Aww wow, thank you so much
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T_T I hope you feel better... *gives cyber cookie?* But omg...>.> I love it. The rhyming is awesome~ (I say that a lot, don't I? =/ Well, rhymes are cool.) And the last stanza is really powerful. It makes me...well, want to write. xD; Definitely
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~ thanx For Cyber Cookie ~
Thank you so so much, any feedback is awesome feedback
Great, im like, inspiration! Thanx
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aww thats really good...
I hope you feel better soon
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