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Now the lady behind Ali is Nena, Ali's life long nurse. She speaks strangly and even though Ali corrects her, Nena always speaks this way.

 

Nena is protective of Ali, seeing her more as a daughter, even though Nena is only 12 years older. She was a orphaned child that took on a cleaning job for Ali's parents when she was 12, shortly before Ali was born. In time became her nurse and primary care giver. Nena is a very out spoken hamster who always smiles even when angry. She wants Ali to get married and have a wonderful life as a mother with a loving husband and healthy happy children. thus often tries to hook her up with any man she thinks with care for Ali.



ARIL (A Rat in London) is a cross between The Great Mouse Detective and A Monster in Paris. Ratigan has survived the fall from Big Ben but has total amnesia. A young singer finds the former criminal and hides him from Basil and the authorities, trying to prove there is more to Ratigan. But now she finds herself falling for the Rat she now has joined in her stage performance and only trouble can come out of it when High Class mouse named Ludwig has his eye on the fair singer and plans on eliminating anything that gets in his way. Can she keep Ratigan safe with Basil and Ludwig both want him dead? How will Ratigan survive this when he doesn't even know why they want him gone?

Characters:

Ratigan (representing Francour): Has no memory of who he is or of his past, he joins a young singer on stage. He is unsure why she is trying so hard to protect him, but he finds himself smitten by this young elegant rat.

Ali (representing Lucille): A young singer who is the newest star in a up scale theatre. She wishes to protect Ratigan and prove that anyone can change if given a chance. But her feeling go much deeper than she first intends.

Basil (representing Raoul): When Basil accidentally finds out that his nemesis is still alive, only Ali stands in his way of making Ratigan pay for the crimes he's committed. Can Ali convince him to see past Ratigan's crimes and give him another chance?

Dawson ( representing Emile): Being Basil's new partner, he finds himself in another adventure with the nefarious Professor Ratigan. But now is torn between aiding Basil in turning Ratigan in, or giving the changed Rat another chance.

Candie: Ali's gypsy sister, finds herself siding with her sister with trying to help the confused Rat. But when her Card's reveal danger and even death down this path, she finds she is having a hard time deciding on her sister's happiness or her sister's safety.

Ludwig (representing Maynott) Is a High Class Mouse who only wants to improve his image and sees Ali's new found stardom as his ticket to a even richer and glamorous life. But when a rat seems to get in his way, he must find a way of getting his out of the picture, in any means possible.

Disclaimer
Ratigan (c) Disney
A Rat in London Parody (c) me
Art (c) me

Ali belongs to my sister.

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Comments: 21

Cellenia2 [2013-11-12 19:22:53 +0000 UTC]

OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH, I HAVE A HAMSTER AS NANA, IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIH


Oh GOSH, I just LOVE her, her hair, her big cheeks, her ears, her tail, HER WAY TO SPEAK, her way to care about Ali, IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIH

NO, not Ludwig for Ali (even if he is sexy), someone better is coming for having babies with her >^<


And Ali's expression is my favourite, OH GOSH, great pouting expression XDDDD


And lovely background


GREAT PAGE AS USUAL !!!

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StarXurs In reply to Cellenia2 [2013-11-13 04:35:01 +0000 UTC]

Haha I thought you would like her

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InsaneInTheMembrane3 [2013-11-11 13:15:18 +0000 UTC]

Ali looks so bored to death...Mind if I tackle her?

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StarXurs In reply to InsaneInTheMembrane3 [2013-11-13 04:14:28 +0000 UTC]

Nena mind tackle you back...

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InsaneInTheMembrane3 In reply to StarXurs [2013-11-13 13:11:39 +0000 UTC]

*tackles Ali* I'm taking the chance anyway!

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6PrinceBelial [2013-11-05 08:41:49 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww, a hamster !!!!!!! I freaking LOVE hamsters !

She is really cute, and I adore how you make Ali's feeling at this moment XD I love too the details on the desk and the beautiful background. Great job, sister !

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StarXurs In reply to 6PrinceBelial [2013-11-05 14:53:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much, And I love hamsters too. So cute and fluffy yeah I decided I should start adding some more detailed backgrounds, it improves the comic so much more

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6PrinceBelial In reply to StarXurs [2013-11-05 22:22:10 +0000 UTC]

Hamsters are so fluffy and so adorables

That's good to know

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RomanceFreak [2013-11-05 03:00:11 +0000 UTC]

Aaww, this is cute!

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KiaraLPhoenix [2013-11-05 00:38:25 +0000 UTC]

Aww, Nena looks very sweet! And ain't no shame in talking in 3rd person! Kiara sometimes does it too when Kiara doesn't know it....




Wait, what? O.O

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KattheHatter18 [2013-11-04 20:07:58 +0000 UTC]

This is way cool! I love the similarity to its premise and then the differences make it awesome!! Nena seems fun! ^^ Like a nosey aunt XD

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ProfessorRatiganFan [2013-11-04 15:57:59 +0000 UTC]

Sorry Nena; I know you mean well but no Ludwig for Ali.XD

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Toony-Tornado [2013-11-04 07:10:10 +0000 UTC]

Awww, I just wanna huggle Nena!!!

Lol, sorry hun, but Ludwig bad for pretty Ali.

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StarXurs In reply to Toony-Tornado [2013-11-04 07:18:58 +0000 UTC]

Haha Nena will give you the tightest bear hug you will ever received...but you will never win an argument against her. And neither will Ali XD

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Toony-Tornado In reply to StarXurs [2013-11-04 07:21:14 +0000 UTC]

Yaaay!!!

Yeah I kinda figured as much, I easily cave in arguments

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WingsOfASong [2013-11-04 07:07:26 +0000 UTC]

Nena is ADORABLE. But no Ludwig for Ali. xD

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StarXurs In reply to WingsOfASong [2013-11-04 07:17:55 +0000 UTC]

Indeed she is but she's stubborn, impossible to argue with

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WingsOfASong In reply to StarXurs [2013-11-04 07:20:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeah? xD

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The-Sea-Cat [2013-11-04 07:03:51 +0000 UTC]

Sorry Nena, no Ludwig for Ali.

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StarXurs In reply to The-Sea-Cat [2013-11-04 07:17:05 +0000 UTC]

Pfft good luck arguing with her 8P

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The-Sea-Cat In reply to StarXurs [2013-11-04 07:25:35 +0000 UTC]

lol!

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