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ARIL (A Rat in London) is a cross between The Great Mouse Detective and A Monster in Paris. Ratigan has survived the fall from Big Ben but has total amnesia. A young singer finds the former criminal and hides him from Basil and the authorities, trying to prove there is more to Ratigan. But now she finds herself falling for the Rat she now has joined in her stage performance and only trouble can come out of it when High Class mouse named Ludwig has his eye on the fair singer and plans on eliminating anything that gets in his way. Can she keep Ratigan safe with Basil and Ludwig both want him dead? How will Ratigan survive this when he doesn't even know why they want him gone?

Characters:

Ratigan (representing Francour): Has no memory of who he is or of his past, he joins a young singer on stage. He is unsure why she is trying so hard to protect him, but he finds himself smitten by this young elegant rat.

Ali (representing Lucille): A young singer who is the newest star in a up scale theatre. She wishes to protect Ratigan and prove that anyone can change if given a chance. But her feeling go much deeper than she first intends.

Basil (representing Raoul): When Basil accidentally finds out that his nemesis is still alive, only Ali stands in his way of making Ratigan pay for the crimes he's committed. Can Ali convince him to see past Ratigan's crimes and give him another chance?

Dawson ( representing Emile): Being Basil's new partner, he finds himself in another adventure with the nefarious Professor Ratigan. But now is torn between aiding Basil in turning Ratigan in, or giving the changed Rat another chance.

Candie: Ali's gypsy sister, finds herself siding with her sister with trying to help the confused Rat. But when her Card's reveal danger and even death down this path, she finds she is having a hard time deciding on her sister's happiness or her sister's safety.

Ludwig (representing Maynott) Is a High Class Mouse who only wants to improve his image and sees Ali's new found stardom as his ticket to a even richer and glamorous life. But when a rat seems to get in his way, he must find a way of getting his out of the picture, in any means possible.

Disclaimer
Ratigan (c) Disney
A Rat in London Parody (c) me
Art (c) me

Ali belongs to my sister.

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Comments: 49

baboonfan [2013-09-12 07:54:42 +0000 UTC]

This comic is looking good!

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StarXurs In reply to baboonfan [2013-09-12 16:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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GaetanMoliere [2013-09-09 17:27:31 +0000 UTC]

OMG SHIT HAPPENED
ALBERT IS HERE

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StarXurs In reply to GaetanMoliere [2013-09-10 01:28:19 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaha yes he is here, he'll be shown more of in the comic too

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KiaraLPhoenix [2013-09-06 20:50:39 +0000 UTC]

I see Albert! XD

Wonderful job on this page! I really love the coloring! You're better at that than me! X3 <3

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StarXurs In reply to KiaraLPhoenix [2013-09-07 18:20:41 +0000 UTC]

Haha yuppers XD


My coloring? This is paint bucket with some cheesy lighting effects But thanks so much anyway XD and I dont think so hun

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KiaraLPhoenix In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-08 11:08:56 +0000 UTC]

Don't sell yourself out, luv! You're really talented and I love your work! Always makes me smile when I see new artwork from you!

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StarXurs In reply to KiaraLPhoenix [2013-09-08 17:34:56 +0000 UTC]

Aww gee thanksy

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6PrinceBelial [2013-09-05 12:32:18 +0000 UTC]

Nice page my sister, the blond guy seems to be an important character (Never saw the movie A monster In Paris ^^' ) But I liked the design of this one, especially the background, I liked details

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StarXurs In reply to 6PrinceBelial [2013-09-05 21:10:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much and indeed he is, hes the main antagonists. The movie was wonderful except the ending pissed me off >8T And I had fun with the details actually ^^

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6PrinceBelial In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-06 07:30:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh, OK, Ali saw "A Monster in Paris" yesterday She loved it ^^Β 

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StarXurs In reply to 6PrinceBelial [2013-09-06 07:45:03 +0000 UTC]

It is a good movie

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NIGHTSTORM77 [2013-09-04 17:01:27 +0000 UTC]

ooooo, nice, albert in mouse version

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DominotheFembot [2013-09-03 22:04:41 +0000 UTC]

:The mice look better than the guys in the movie.

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StarXurs In reply to DominotheFembot [2013-09-03 22:08:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much

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RomanceFreak [2013-09-03 19:57:12 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, that character looks awesome!Β 

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StarXurs In reply to RomanceFreak [2013-09-03 21:11:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanksy

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RomanceFreak In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-03 21:45:12 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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Toony-Tornado [2013-09-03 15:45:16 +0000 UTC]

The character you picked to resemble maynott is too awesome! I saw in some comments that you made him a lab rat and that's why he's pretty big, that's just such a great idea!


Eeee, and i adore Johnathan! He's so cute! XD

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StarXurs In reply to Toony-Tornado [2013-09-03 21:10:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks he's actually a mouse not a rat

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Toony-Tornado In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-03 21:54:34 +0000 UTC]

aaaaand I called him a rat again


MOUSE!! he's a mouse!Β 


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StarXurs In reply to Toony-Tornado [2013-09-03 21:56:00 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha

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Toony-Tornado In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-03 22:32:41 +0000 UTC]

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Toony-Tornado In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-03 21:52:18 +0000 UTC]

Darnnit! I meant to say rat! I saw that you mentioned it before!

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ProfessorRatiganFan [2013-09-03 14:38:57 +0000 UTC]

I like the design of these characters!Β  Nice job with this page!

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StarXurs In reply to ProfessorRatiganFan [2013-09-03 21:09:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much

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ProfessorRatiganFan In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-03 21:13:18 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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travis-zenryo [2013-09-03 07:28:24 +0000 UTC]

awesome XD the expression is great


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Cellenia2 [2013-09-03 07:23:39 +0000 UTC]

... Sis... Are you alright...? Your comment worries me...

Ooooooh, it's HIM !!! The super hyper great wonderful no talented... Hubert, right '^' ...? AS MOUSE, IIIIIIH, ADORABLE !!!

......... Okay, I have to admit it, Mouse Maynott is... is... GORGEOUS !!! Blond WITH A MUSTACHE, IIIIIIIH !!!!

And his assistant is sooooo adorable, I completely crack, iiiiih !

And very good work on the background, a very good 'touch of class' x3

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StarXurs In reply to Cellenia2 [2013-09-03 07:30:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm ok I was talking with Ian for a bit and he was telling me about....his crisis....


But Im ok now. And You were close its Albert haha


He's not quite Maynott, he's an OC based off of him. I dont have a name yet. And yes I know heehee


Oh and thats Johnathan, yeah he's his assistant who doesn't really like him but doesn't have the confidence to stand up to him (He bully Johnathan about his big ears)


Haha ^^thanks so much sis

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Cellenia2 In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-03 07:41:07 +0000 UTC]

...... My poor baby... I wish I could be near...

Thank you so much for your concern, sis... You are a love...

Wooooops, naaaailed it xD

Yes yes, don't worry, I know he is not Maynott
Mmmm... Why not... Ludwig Hatnott xD ? I AM AWFUL WITH NAMES XDDD
*Drool*

Awww, poor little sweetheart... YOU BULLIER !!! *Slap him*

It is my pleasure !

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StarXurs In reply to Cellenia2 [2013-09-03 07:47:33 +0000 UTC]

Same here


Well I care about Ian and you so much...


Actually I like Ludwig...it sounds like one of the stupid up tight rich family would name their child XD


Haha he "likes" you the comic you know XD

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Cellenia2 In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-03 19:19:41 +0000 UTC]


And we care so much about you, sis...


XDDDD That's why I chose it ! Poor Ludwig von Beethoven XDDDD


Thank you, I appreciate :3 *Hug him*


My talented sis !

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StarXurs In reply to Cellenia2 [2013-09-03 21:20:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh sis....


Oooh thats were I heard it from XD haha oopsΒ 


Good....fyi he turns out to be more of a dick then you may think...

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Cellenia2 In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-10 19:30:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh, sis... I LOVE YOUR NEW ICON


Whaaaat ^^ ?


LOL XDDDD


Oh, really...? WORST than Maynott O^O ? IMPOCHIBLE !

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StarXurs In reply to Cellenia2 [2013-09-10 22:00:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much


...I have no Idea 8'D


I dont want to say too much but...he believes that his spouse should be with him only to make him look better. (I.E she needs to be beautiful, talented and rich) But he also thinks females should serve men and listen to everything he he tells them.

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Cellenia2 In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-29 17:05:52 +0000 UTC]

That's normal


-__________- Okay, A NEW GASTON, RUN FOR YOUR LIVES !!!!

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StarXurs In reply to Cellenia2 [2013-09-29 18:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Haha pretty much XD RUN!

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Cellenia2 In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-29 19:02:28 +0000 UTC]

WE ARE DOOOOOOOOOOOOMED !!!

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The-Sea-Cat [2013-09-03 07:08:25 +0000 UTC]

Oooh! Nice!

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StarXurs In reply to The-Sea-Cat [2013-09-03 07:17:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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The-Sea-Cat In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-03 07:55:39 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure!

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WingsOfASong [2013-09-03 07:01:46 +0000 UTC]

I like the design for these two! *squee*

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StarXurs In reply to WingsOfASong [2013-09-03 07:15:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks the grey mouse is Johnathan I dont know the name of the other yetΒ 

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WingsOfASong In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-03 07:16:23 +0000 UTC]

Aww, what a cute name! I love the rat's design! And ooh, I see a cigarette holder. :3

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StarXurs In reply to WingsOfASong [2013-09-03 07:22:45 +0000 UTC]

Hes actually a mouse but he brags hes so large because he was a "lab mouse" genetically altered to be larger (Part of his tail is missing actually)

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WingsOfASong In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-03 07:23:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh! My bad!


Aww, poor guy....

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StarXurs In reply to WingsOfASong [2013-09-03 07:33:56 +0000 UTC]

Its ok I created him to look like that so character in the comic would often mistaken him as suchΒ 


And yeah

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WingsOfASong In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-03 08:11:33 +0000 UTC]

Aw, I see.

-is not sure if want to snuggle-

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