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ARIL (A Rat in London) is a cross between The Great Mouse Detective and A Monster in Paris. Ratigan has survived the fall from Big Ben but has total amnesia. A young singer finds the former criminal and hides him from Basil and the authorities, trying to prove there is more to Ratigan. But now she finds herself falling for the Rat she now has joined in her stage performance and only trouble can come out of it when High Class mouse named Ludwig has his eye on the fair singer and plans on eliminating anything that gets in his way. Can she keep Ratigan safe with Basil and Ludwig both want him dead? How will Ratigan survive this when he doesn't even know why they want him gone?

Characters:

Ratigan (representing Francour): Has no memory of who he is or of his past, he joins a young singer on stage. He is unsure why she is trying so hard to protect him, but he finds himself smitten by this young elegant rat.

Ali (representing Lucille): A young singer who is the newest star in a up scale theatre. She wishes to protect Ratigan and prove that anyone can change if given a chance. But her feeling go much deeper than she first intends.

Basil (representing Raoul): When Basil accidentally finds out that his nemesis is still alive, only Ali stands in his way of making Ratigan pay for the crimes he's committed. Can Ali convince him to see past Ratigan's crimes and give him another chance?

Dawson ( representing Emile): Being Basil's new partner, he finds himself in another adventure with the nefarious Professor Ratigan. But now is torn between aiding Basil in turning Ratigan in, or giving the changed Rat another chance.

Candie: Ali's gypsy sister, finds herself siding with her sister with trying to help the confused Rat. But when her Card's reveal danger and even death down this path, she finds she is having a hard time deciding on her sister's happiness or her sister's safety.

Ludwig (representing Maynott) Is a High Class Mouse who only wants to improve his image and sees Ali's new found stardom as his ticket to a even richer and glamorous life. But when a rat seems to get in his way, he must find a way of getting his out of the picture, in any means possible.

Disclaimer
Ratigan (c) Disney
A Rat in London Parody (c) me
Art (c) me

Ali belongs to my sister.

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Comments: 28

NIGHTSTORM77 [2013-09-04 16:57:20 +0000 UTC]

aw, poor ratigan

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Cellenia2 [2013-09-01 15:57:54 +0000 UTC]

......... May I slap these two mouses >_< !? Okay, I understand two hours ago, he threatened all of them, BUT STILL !!!

My poor Jaaaaaaaaaaames

I especially like the second picture, the fear and surprise of the two mouses are very well done !

The third, indeed, there is a problem about sizes, BUT DO NOT WORRY, it is surely one of the most difficult thing to do in drawings, everyone gets this problem ! But you did it once, and won't do it in the future, so, don't worry
......... Why do I especially love the feet xD ???

Great pages it was, sis

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StarXurs In reply to Cellenia2 [2013-09-01 17:26:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah the sizes were a problem But oh well something I need to work on.  But it is something difficult so its not as bad XD


His feet are cute...oddly enough haha.

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Cellenia2 In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-01 17:28:20 +0000 UTC]

No, indeed, don't worry, you'll get better little by little


Hihihi, yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees

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RomanceFreak [2013-09-01 10:00:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh, poor Ratigan! I would help him!

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xOKatTitanShifterOx [2013-09-01 06:47:01 +0000 UTC]

Awww poor ratigan I love him alot too

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travis-zenryo [2013-09-01 06:42:16 +0000 UTC]

more

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6PrinceBelial [2013-09-01 06:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Are they afraid because they recognize him ? Are they afraid because he's a rat ? A lot of thoughts of fear through the couple !  

I especially liked the way they fled !

Poor Ratigan... He deserves more love !!!

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StarXurs In reply to 6PrinceBelial [2013-09-01 17:16:22 +0000 UTC]

A little of both actually, And indeed he does deserve more love 

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WingsOfASong [2013-09-01 05:04:01 +0000 UTC]

Poor bby, though I'd be scared too. And you are perfection. I will accept no arguments, bby.

Speaking of villains, you are more than welcome to use Daniel for the bad guy. His bio's in my gallery.

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InsaneInTheMembrane3 [2013-09-01 04:57:45 +0000 UTC]

Well, that's to be expected, I mean hey, when you look at it clearly, he might as well choke you...but then again...why would he?

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ProfessorRatiganFan [2013-09-01 04:49:29 +0000 UTC]

Shame on you mice!>8C  But I guess I see where they're coming from.

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StarXurs In reply to ProfessorRatiganFan [2013-09-01 04:52:18 +0000 UTC]

Haha Toony said something similar XD

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ProfessorRatiganFan In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-01 05:05:09 +0000 UTC]

I noticed.

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Toony-Tornado [2013-09-01 04:38:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh come on people, er, mice!XD

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StarXurs In reply to Toony-Tornado [2013-09-01 04:41:42 +0000 UTC]

Well in their defense he did try to kill their queen and has murdered hundreds of mice and other rodents...they don't know he doesn't remember who he is (and their I go again explaining what doesn't need to be explained haha)

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Toony-Tornado In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-01 04:45:43 +0000 UTC]

Lol, It's alright, I'm just feeling protective because he seems like he's gonna be such a sweetheart now

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StarXurs In reply to Toony-Tornado [2013-09-01 04:50:18 +0000 UTC]

Haha well he is, hes a lot like Francour with new innocence  


May I ask a favor? Im trying to create a villian for this comic, one to represent Maynott. Would you mind helping me?

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Toony-Tornado In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-01 05:31:47 +0000 UTC]

I'll certainly try, were you thinking of creating an oc?

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StarXurs In reply to Toony-Tornado [2013-09-01 17:49:32 +0000 UTC]

Sorry I fell alseep last night and didn't check my messages this morning, But I finished the OC So sorry

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Toony-Tornado In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-01 18:39:46 +0000 UTC]

Lol, it's okay, it was my fault for leaving the computer.(had to get laundry switched over XP)

I can't wait to see him later!

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The-Sea-Cat [2013-09-01 03:59:55 +0000 UTC]

Why don't you like it?

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StarXurs In reply to The-Sea-Cat [2013-09-01 04:19:26 +0000 UTC]

Well it's mostly the last panel...it seems very unproportional, the characters seem the wrong size...

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The-Sea-Cat In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-01 04:19:56 +0000 UTC]

It seems alright to me...

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StarXurs In reply to The-Sea-Cat [2013-09-01 04:22:56 +0000 UTC]

 Eh I'm a perfection, i always feel my art isn't as good as it could be

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The-Sea-Cat In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-01 04:23:37 +0000 UTC]

I think we're all that way with our art.

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StarXurs In reply to The-Sea-Cat [2013-09-01 04:26:54 +0000 UTC]

Yuppers haha

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The-Sea-Cat In reply to StarXurs [2013-09-01 04:28:06 +0000 UTC]

:3

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