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Published: 2017-02-11 01:05:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 4836; Favourites: 170; Downloads: 8
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...So great was her reign and so brilliant her glory
That long was the shadow she cast
Which fell dark upon the young sister she loved
And grew only darker as days and nights passed...
The introduction reminds me of the song Lullaby for a Princess.
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so I wasn't the only one drawing that unintended parallel.
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I was also reminded of the reverse The Moon Rises:
Am I so wrong to wish that they
Would see things like I do?
And am I so wrong to think
That they might love me too?
Why shouldn't they adore me?
Is it not within my right?
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probably fits better considering the attitude of it being a right to be adored/have what the other has
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I think they both fit, especially since: "The eldest was jolly, with great strength to boast. And her people respected and loved her the most" matches up with:
She smiled and said, "Surely, there is no [other]
So lovely and so well beloved as I."
It's cool to know another person drew an that unintentionalΒ allusion.
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Ooh interesting, I haven't heard that song before.
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OH MY GOSH THIS IS SO PRETTY
I can't wait to see what you have in store for the series!
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AHHHH Oko this is so good and good looking and i'm just hooked and ready for more~!!
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Thank you so much!!!!!! ! !!
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Reading this page is like watching the beginning of a Disney movie. It feels so magical. It must be the flow of the visuals and the poem.
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That poem is so good ;A;Β
I haven't seen many lore intros that I found interesting, but this one is amazing - beautifully flowing visuals, and I love how it's integrated with the characters by having them talk about it.
It would sure be nice if the kids achieved their dream, they have such a nice practical solution for it. :'DΒ
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This is prettyyyyy !!! And cute !! And interesting ! The thing I love the most about Nuzlockes is the worldbuilding and the lore every Nuzlocker create 
(Is that Fairy-type Valerie??)
Hope you're gonna continue !
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I think you're the first one to ask, it is indeed the same Valerie!
Thank you so much!! That's also one of my favorite parts of nuzlockes: even when given the same game people come up with so many cool and different ideas and it's so fun to see. I certainly hope this story will be interesting enough!!
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I can't wait to see how she'll be relevant to the story !!
I'm sure you can create something cool. From what I've seen you're already pretty good at it
Good luck, pal !
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This is possibly the most interesting start I've seen O-O
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oh goodness that is high praise, thank you so much!
Hopefully I'll be able to hold up to it...at least after the ol' "let's get a starter Pokemon" part lol
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Omg this is so cute!! The first half is so beautiful and the second is so adorable??? I want more
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THIS LOOKS SO GREAT
The story is ominous and very very intriguing with it's story-book feel and i LOVE HOW THE GIRLS LOOK THEY ARE SO CUTE!!!!
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YEAH BOI THANK YOU!!!
i love them so much, it's a shame i can't just keep all the characters as kids the whole time
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OKO YESSSSSS THIS IS AMAZING AND BEAUTIFUL I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE MOREΒ
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lovely opening and flow of composition as well as color, and liking the more painter like style for the backgrounds in the regular comic panels. a lovely start.
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This looks like so much fun! Is it on the nuzlocke forums as well?
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Thank you so much! I'm actually not sure how to use the nuz forums yet but once I figure that out I'll probably put it up there too
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Awesome! I'm sure a bunch of other readers over there would love to take a look at this, too.
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WOAH 
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Oh my god it's here!! I'm so pumped -- your art is lovely!
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Heck yeah!! Thank you so much!!
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uwaaaa this looks so so good, and everything flows so well! i'm super excited to see more!!
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-incoherent screams of the damned-
Its here Seriously oko this is some hella fucking amazingly drawn art and hot damn I /LOVE/ that background lore bit
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FRIGGIN FINALLY AMMIRTE?
Thanks so much! i'm always a slut for lore
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This intro sets up so muchΒ for your comic: a nice twist on Kalosian lore, the main two characters, their relationship as kids . . . And damn, that art!! I'm really looking forward to more.
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OOOOOOOO interesting~
I'm a ho for some fairytale and lore stuff. I'm gonna be keeping an eye on this.
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yo fairytales are my JAM, I'm so glad!
Thanks!!
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Ooh, I like that beginning.
Β Also those kids are adorable omg. That's my kind of marriage contract, haha
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Thank you so much!!
ngl, the "childhood marriage promise" trope is one of my favorites, I couldn't resist
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Woah. I am super intrigued, this page was drawn amazingly well!
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This whole thing is gorgeous, can't wait to see what happens.Β
Keep up the great work. 
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Oh my gosh Oko this is gorgeous, I don't even know where to begin! It all flows so well, the poem and the visuals. And your backgrounds, YOUR BACKGROUNDS ARE ABSOLUTELY STUNNING! (teach me your ways) I'm really excited for this nuzlocke, can't wait to see where this goes!
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Thank you so much!!!Β
I can't wait either dude!
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