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The past lays broken into pieces,the line of debris reaches from then till now.
ThereΒ΄s no retreat to sweep up this mess
of shattered dreams and crushed hopes.
Survey the shards behind you, what do you see?
Some look smooth and shiny,
they could easily be put back together.
Others razor sharp, they cut you to the bone.
Pulverised under foot the sands of time
whip up a storm, stinging your cheeks
parched and dry, evaporating tears can no longer fall.
As the storm subsides a thick layer of dust comes to rest.
You are here.
Say a prayer. ThereΒ΄s no going back.
20.03.2017
Suzanne.
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This is really really well done, well described. Sometimes I want to turn back time too, but as you said, there is no going back.
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ThatΒ΄s right we just have to keep going forward Β . Thank you Β
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Wow, this is fantastic writing
I am so sorry that it comes from such pain
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Thank you so much my friend
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You are very welcome 
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Yes I wrote this and lots of other things, as a release for my grief. Thank you for reading
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We're looking for poetry, fiction, short fiction, and artwork for our June 2017 issue. Submissions end on May 20th
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You tell me what sort of thing you are looking for and IΒ΄ll send you a few for consideration.
Thanks for 
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I'll send you a NOTE on what we are looking for
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As a silent scream ... beautifully described.
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Thank you dear Mayumi
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Time is unforgiving, time is unstoppable... Amazing poem!! Very great
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The last two lines are like a sharp shock and make great impact.Β It's like watching a film that features oneself and thinking perhaps this is not real.Β Hoping it isn't real. Then reality hits you saying 'You are here. Say a prayer. There is no going back.'
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ThatΒ΄s true, sometimes you wonder how all these things could have happened but they are over and done, you got through and there is no way to go back. Thanks Shelley and for the
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ThatΒ΄s good of you to say, thank you
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