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Published: 2012-12-21 06:27:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 3489; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 20
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Description This...Took...Forever....BUT OMG I LOVE HOW IT CAME OUT!!!!!!!


I had so much fun with this, except some computer problems that made it hard to color. So for any mistakes Blame my laptop, not me....please? lol



So this is my half of an AT with she asked for Ali's Death scene. We agreed on a comic because we didn't think all the emotions and everything could be captured in just one picture. So I did a comic....in which I kept adding scenes...expressions and detailing with made the comic take so long. I actually had to remove a scene because it was so long. But I had actually messed up on the picture and it looked really funny so thats why I did add it.

I know there was sapposed to be other dialog then what I wrote. But all the dialog that went on the the story she wrote, I would have nevr finished the comic. So I threw in my own....I hope it doesnt take away from the story she wrote. It was so beautiful and touching, it made me cry and have to stop reading for a few minutes.

Anyway I hope you like it hun. You deserve it.
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Comments: 58

lokifan1045 [2014-08-15 02:52:23 +0000 UTC]

poor ratigan    

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Shojo-Skip [2013-11-13 13:28:59 +0000 UTC]

I have my own fan character named Ali, inspired by a close friend of mine from elementary school (I'm in college now).

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InuDante [2013-10-03 14:52:20 +0000 UTC]

I'm crying. Oh my god, I love it!

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StarXurs In reply to InuDante [2013-10-06 15:52:49 +0000 UTC]

Im sorry


And sorry about the lack of replies on both accounts I was super sick and took some time off of DA

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InuDante In reply to StarXurs [2013-10-07 12:51:45 +0000 UTC]

It's ok. Shit happens. We understand. How are you feeling now?

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Lady-Ceridwen [2013-06-22 19:52:44 +0000 UTC]

Aww! It's so sad! But very well done, the emotions are radiating from it!!

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Birdy-Papa [2013-05-01 20:42:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh, very emotionnal !!!
I love so much the Ratigan's expressions !

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DisneyFanGirl001 [2013-03-19 10:06:08 +0000 UTC]

This pic makes my heart ache bad.

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StarXurs In reply to DisneyFanGirl001 [2013-03-20 02:02:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks and sorry

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DisneyFanGirl001 In reply to StarXurs [2013-03-20 06:51:43 +0000 UTC]

don't worry I got over it I just had to cry for one hour. But apart from that it's great!

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Dream-Angel-Artista [2013-02-18 03:53:34 +0000 UTC]

O__________O This IT a GOOD MOVIE EVER!
T___T soo sad and Romantic & sweet!

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travis-zenryo [2013-02-11 21:26:56 +0000 UTC]

so awesomely epic and sad and the same time

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blazewolf96 [2013-02-03 04:37:21 +0000 UTC]

T-T so many feel

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RomanceFreak [2013-01-29 03:32:43 +0000 UTC]

This is sad. But it's very well done.

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ALS123 [2012-12-29 17:27:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh, the feels The poor dears For some reason I especially love Ratigan's pose as he's sliding down the bank to Ali. And their expressions throughout the whole thing are spot on, you always do so well with expressions in all your pics. Amazing work as usual

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StarXurs In reply to ALS123 [2012-12-29 21:03:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you i like ratigans pose too. But oo bad my computer was freaking out though 8T

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RosesnWater [2012-12-24 08:05:58 +0000 UTC]

wow... very elegant in so many ways, It's definitely very emotional and I admit to shedding a few tears... I love the characters and the idea, I commend you and the original writer for making such an interesting comic and fanfic

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StarXurs In reply to RosesnWater [2012-12-24 14:05:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much

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Toony-Tornado [2012-12-21 23:14:38 +0000 UTC]


This so sad, but so beautiful... gaw, I'm crying now! poor Ratigan!

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StarXurs In reply to Toony-Tornado [2012-12-22 03:39:07 +0000 UTC]

Aw im sorry

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chook-four [2012-12-21 22:24:46 +0000 UTC]

TT^TT SO...SO SAD I NEARLY CRIED...

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StarXurs In reply to chook-four [2012-12-22 03:38:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh im sorry sis

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SherlockHolmes90 [2012-12-21 19:33:51 +0000 UTC]

The last pic shows that even giant mutant sewer rats can actually love. I feel kinda sorry for him.

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Just4Fun02 [2012-12-21 16:12:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh no...no, poor ratigan. No one should go through that, not even villains. You're making me cry, it's just so sad (starts crying and hides face). These emotions that you inspire only make your work all the more stronger.

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StarXurs In reply to Just4Fun02 [2012-12-21 21:17:36 +0000 UTC]

Aww thaank you so so much

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Just4Fun02 In reply to StarXurs [2012-12-22 01:14:19 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome!

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GaetanMoliere [2012-12-21 15:59:20 +0000 UTC]

Loved the little Hercule reference ^^
It was touching ;.;

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StarXurs In reply to GaetanMoliere [2012-12-21 21:15:06 +0000 UTC]

I didnt realize i did but i do see it

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Glacia1 [2012-12-21 15:49:21 +0000 UTC]

ALLLLLLLLLI! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *cries* How did this happen? *cries some more uncontrollably*

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StarXurs In reply to Glacia1 [2012-12-21 21:14:05 +0000 UTC]

She was out picking mushrooms for supper and a cat found her. She ran and didnt see a cliff, falling down the cliff she actually dies of internal bleeding

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Glacia1 In reply to StarXurs [2012-12-21 21:25:52 +0000 UTC]

DX OH NOEZ!!!!!!!! Poor Ali! *runs away crying*

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StarXurs In reply to Glacia1 [2012-12-21 21:13:39 +0000 UTC]

She was out picking mushrooms for supper and a cat found her. She ran and didnt see a cliff, falling down the cliff she actually dies of internal bleeding

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Tiger-Tomboy14 [2012-12-21 15:08:27 +0000 UTC]

This is soo sad. OYu captured it just how I pictured it while I read it, Beautiful Job

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StarXurs In reply to Tiger-Tomboy14 [2012-12-21 21:15:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so muchi

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StarXurs In reply to Tiger-Tomboy14 [2012-12-21 21:13:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so muchi

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StarXurs In reply to Tiger-Tomboy14 [2012-12-21 21:11:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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StellarFairy [2012-12-21 14:08:06 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh dear....

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Cellenia [2012-12-21 08:57:38 +0000 UTC]

...... Alright, I'm ready now...... I'm sorry, dear, I needed... a pause...... It was just too much for me......

... When I said you were the only one in my mind to be able to put on pictures "My beloved one" , I meant it...... And now, I confirme it... Only you... your wonderful art... your wonderful way to draw Ratigan... could do it... You did it, dear... You did it...

I don't even know where to begin... Oh well, prepare yourself for a big comment...

Ratigan : ... Gosh, how can you draw so many expressions for him...? Disney only managed to show him under his sneaky, sensual and dangerous side... You made him... human... It's so heartbreaking to see him in this state...... But it made me love him much more...
(All the pictures of him are wonderful, but my favourite is the one where he is finding Ali... What a pose...)

Ali : ... An angel joining back the Heaven... She is just so beautiful... But her suffer......... Too terrible to watch...... You perfectly showed it, but you perfectly showed the love she shares for Ratigan, her last happiness to have him near her for her last instants... Her dress is gorgeous, her eyes... Just her eyes...... Truly an angel...
(Same thing than Ratigan, but I especially love the one where we only see her smiling and crying face...)

The background/The colors : So... perfect... It looks so big... So well done... Coming from a true illustrated book... The beautiful nature... which killed her...
(You were absolutely right to put this scene at the sunset... The day leaving little by little is like her life leaving her body little by little... until the night... It was gorgeous... still so sad...)

Dawson : It made me smile a little... Before, I never thought he could be the Doctor of Ali's town, even friends with them... But you made me think, and I think (... Yeah...) I will add him... I will just find how... Anyway, I find him cute, and very concerned about Ratigan and Ali... It was touching...

The emotions : ... You did what was the most important in this comic, dear... You just did it...... I could not stop my tears...... I could not stop shaking and moaning in pain...... It was too much for me...

... Thank you, just... thank you... I don't deserve such beauty, such perfection, I really don't... But I owe you a very big emotion... Thank you... Thank you...

(And don't worry, I don't mind you changed the dialogs, at all... It fits better like this for this comic...)

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StarXurs In reply to Cellenia [2012-12-21 21:19:26 +0000 UTC]

Wow! What a long comment but i love reading comments. But i am so so glad you love this. I wanted to make you something special. Im glad i was able to do this for you.

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Cellenia In reply to StarXurs [2012-12-22 08:51:08 +0000 UTC]

I-I hope it didn't mind you u////u ... In front of such a perfect comic, I CAN'T just give a "Oh whow, handsome, thank you !" , like some do...

I loved it more than you think... It is special... It is perfect... It is almost exactly like "My beloved one" ... *Wipe my tears* I love this couple so much...

Thanks... Thanks again...

(... Be prepared to see in the day... her funeral...)

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StarXurs In reply to Cellenia [2012-12-22 13:33:02 +0000 UTC]

I love this couple too, its so sweet and loving yet...at the same time heart breaking....with a nice chuck of sexy in there too.

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Cellenia In reply to StarXurs [2012-12-22 14:04:19 +0000 UTC]

... You truly mean it...?

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StarXurs In reply to Cellenia [2012-12-22 14:12:19 +0000 UTC]

I dl i really a d truely do

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Cellenia In reply to StarXurs [2012-12-22 14:16:00 +0000 UTC]

... Thank you... Thank you... Hearing that about my couple... *Is crying* Thank you...

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StarXurs In reply to Cellenia [2012-12-22 21:20:52 +0000 UTC]

Awww *hug* im glad i made you happy dear

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Cellenia In reply to StarXurs [2012-12-24 09:28:39 +0000 UTC]

A lot, thanks thanks THANKS

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Cellenia [2012-12-21 08:00:30 +0000 UTC]

............... Let me some minuts to do a biggest comment, alright.........?

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WingsOfASong [2012-12-21 06:58:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh....oh no...no....Poor Ratigan....*gross sobbing* Oh my gosh.....that's so heartbreakingly sad.....

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ProfessorRatiganFan [2012-12-21 06:44:05 +0000 UTC]

Damn it! My eyes just started tearing up! Poor Ratigan! Excellent comic, but man I wish I could comfort him somehow...

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StarXurs In reply to ProfessorRatiganFan [2012-12-21 06:54:06 +0000 UTC]

Me too...poor ratigan

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